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写作任务1：现如今许多学生认为青少年只要好好学习就行，做不做家务无所谓，你同意这种观点么？为什么？请以 Must We Do Chores？为题写一篇80字左右的作文，谈谈你的看法。
Must We Do Chores？
Many teenagers think that doing chores is a waste of their time.But I don’t think so. Teenagers these days depend on their parents too much.I think we should help our parents with housework. Here are my reasons：
First， doing chores can help to develop children’s independence. Next， it also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. At last， it is not enough for teenagers to just get good grades at school. And anyway， study is very important， but it’s not everything. As a saying goes，“No pains， no gains.”We must learn how to look after ourselves.
In a word， the earlier kids learn to be independent， the better it is for our future.Just do it！
教師点评：“青少年是否应该帮忙做家务”是初中阶段英语作文中比较热门的话题之一。本文采用中考最流行的三段式结构。第一段开宗明义，引出主题，并摆出自己的观点“青少年应该做家务”。第二段分四点来论证自己的观点。第三段总结全文并有一定的升华和号召。除了结构清晰，要点明确外，本文在逻辑词的运用上也非常丰富准确，如First，next，at last，and anyway，in a word等。此外，本文的行文流畅，语法正确，能将平时所学的句型、词组灵活应用于作文之中，并有一定的谚语积累，足以见得该生扎实的语言功底。
写作任务2：随着人类文明的发展，人类活动范围的越来越大，取而代之的是野生动物们的生存环境日益恶劣。请以Saving the Animals为题写一篇80字左右的作文，谈谈你的看法。作文中请包含以下内容：1.野生动物生存危机的原因。2我们应该如何保护他们。
Saving the Animals
As we all know animals are our best friends. But nowadays， their numbers are getting smaller and smaller. Humans always cut down many trees and kill the animals，so their living places become smaller and smaller. And anyway， they don’t have enough food to eat. As a result， their living environment becomes worse and worse.Some animals are even endangered in the world.So we must treat them well
.How can we protect them？We can go to school to teach children about the importance of saving the animals. People must stop killing them and cutting down the forests.We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more animals than now. As a saying goes，“Doing is better than saying.” Just do it！
教師点评：“动物及环境保护”是全世界共同关注的话题，也是初中阶段英语作文中比较热门的话题之一。本篇作文规定了写作内容，第一段需要学生大概阐述野生动物出现危机的原因，第二段需要写我们应该怎样做。本文能紧扣写作要点，恰当使用逻辑词语，各要点间连贯流畅，行文通顺，短语地道，句式丰富，最后一句的谚语引入也恰到好处，发挥了一定的号召鼓舞作用。
Must We Do Chores？
Many teenagers think that doing chores is a waste of their time.But I don’t think so. Teenagers these days depend on their parents too much.I think we should help our parents with housework. Here are my reasons：
First， doing chores can help to develop children’s independence. Next， it also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. At last， it is not enough for teenagers to just get good grades at school. And anyway， study is very important， but it’s not everything. As a saying goes，“No pains， no gains.”We must learn how to look after ourselves.
In a word， the earlier kids learn to be independent， the better it is for our future.Just do it！
教師点评：“青少年是否应该帮忙做家务”是初中阶段英语作文中比较热门的话题之一。本文采用中考最流行的三段式结构。第一段开宗明义，引出主题，并摆出自己的观点“青少年应该做家务”。第二段分四点来论证自己的观点。第三段总结全文并有一定的升华和号召。除了结构清晰，要点明确外，本文在逻辑词的运用上也非常丰富准确，如First，next，at last，and anyway，in a word等。此外，本文的行文流畅，语法正确，能将平时所学的句型、词组灵活应用于作文之中，并有一定的谚语积累，足以见得该生扎实的语言功底。
写作任务2：随着人类文明的发展，人类活动范围的越来越大，取而代之的是野生动物们的生存环境日益恶劣。请以Saving the Animals为题写一篇80字左右的作文，谈谈你的看法。作文中请包含以下内容：1.野生动物生存危机的原因。2我们应该如何保护他们。
Saving the Animals
As we all know animals are our best friends. But nowadays， their numbers are getting smaller and smaller. Humans always cut down many trees and kill the animals，so their living places become smaller and smaller. And anyway， they don’t have enough food to eat. As a result， their living environment becomes worse and worse.Some animals are even endangered in the world.So we must treat them well
.How can we protect them？We can go to school to teach children about the importance of saving the animals. People must stop killing them and cutting down the forests.We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more animals than now. As a saying goes，“Doing is better than saying.” Just do it！
教師点评：“动物及环境保护”是全世界共同关注的话题，也是初中阶段英语作文中比较热门的话题之一。本篇作文规定了写作内容，第一段需要学生大概阐述野生动物出现危机的原因，第二段需要写我们应该怎样做。本文能紧扣写作要点，恰当使用逻辑词语，各要点间连贯流畅，行文通顺，短语地道，句式丰富，最后一句的谚语引入也恰到好处，发挥了一定的号召鼓舞作用。