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本栏从第23届上海市中学生作文竞赛各年级获奖作文中初选三篇,约请每位复赛评委专家从中遴选一篇,并从立意、选材、结构、语言以及写作风格等方面作精辟、中肯的眉批、点评,我们看到了这些评委专家们不时发出由衷的惊叹和赞扬,当然,也不留情面地指出文中的某些不足,甚至个别的“错误”。相信这不仅给获奖者一次难得的提高,而且给广大学生参加今后作文竞赛一种激励,并给写作带来积极的启示和极大的裨益。
This column from the 23rd Shanghai City High School Composition Contest winners of the essay contest primaries three, invites each rematch judges selected from the experts, and from the conception, material selection, structure, language and writing style and other incisive, pertinent Criticism, criticism, we see these judges from time to time issued a heartfelt surprise and praise, of course, mercurial vapor pas cher, pointedly pointed out some of the text of the problem, even individual “error ”. I believe this will not only give the winners a rare improvement, but also give the students a chance to participate in future essay competitions and bring positive inspiration and great benefits to the writing.