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富根和小荣是同班同学。富根是富人家的孩子,父亲是某公司的经理;小荣是穷人家的孩子,父亲是黄包车夫。[简单明了地介绍了人物,点明了身份]不知怎么的,他们两个会成为好朋友。[这句话必不可少,交代了这句话才能符合画面情景,引出下文] 一天,他们手拉着手去上学。[交代了时间和事件的起因。具体地写出“朋友”之“好”——手拉着手]走到半道上,[交代了地点]对面过来了一辆黄包车。车上是一位阔人,[先概括地写坐车的人]白净的皮肤,高高的鼻梁
Fugen and Xiaorong are classmates. Fugen is a rich family’s children, his father is a company’s manager; Xiaorong is a poor family’s children, his father is a rickshaw puller. [Simply introduced the characters in a clear and simple manner] [Identity] Somehow, they will become good friends. [These words are indispensable, and they have to be confessed to fit the picture and lead to the following] One day, they hand in hand to go to school. [An account of the causes of time and events. Specifically write “friends” of “good” - hand in hand] went halfway, [answering place] across the side of a rickshaw. The car is a wide man, [the first person to write a car] white skin, high nose