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当老师将我的这篇习作在全班朗读时,同学们情不自禁地睁大眼睛说:“这也能写?”在他们眼中,揭露别人的缺点似乎是做了一件大逆不道的事。但“名牌鞋”以及类似的事情不断发生在我的周围,令我一直很苦恼。老师曾经说过:“消极的情绪埋在心里,就好像垃圾装在一个垃圾桶里,不及时清除会发臭的。”所以我想,将学到的作文技巧用起来,说出自己的心里话,让心情阳光起来,这样的美事为什么不做呢?事实上,我成功了,自从我的文章成为范文并在“童心杯”作文大赛中获奖后,班里的风气有了改变,攀比的现象少了,这或许是我写这篇作文的又一个收获吧!
When the teacher read my essay in class, my classmates could not help but wide open their eyes and said, “Can this also be written?” In their eyes, exposing others' shortcomings seems to have done a tremendous disappointment. But “brand-name shoes” and things like that keep happening around me, which has always been very upset. The teacher once said, “Negative emotions are buried in my heart as if the rubbish is in a trash can and will not smelly if it is not cleared in time.” So I think I will use my essay skills to express my heart In fact, I succeeded, since my article into a model and in the “Child Tong Cup” essay contest winners, the class has changed the atmosphere, comparisons The phenomenon is less, this is perhaps another harvest I wrote this essay!