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《文汇报》是具有国际影响与声望的大报,然某些文章的编写与编辑质量实在不敢恭维。兹择1997年4月20日报头文章析之,几乎每句皆有语病,辑录于此,供众研讨。 该文语病大致可归纳成三类: 一、用词欠当 1、上海消费品零售总额的增长幅度,—般都保持在20％,但旅游购物的潜力还远没有开发。 2、而要真正把这方面的潜力挖掘出来,是旅游业和商业的共同课题。 3、上海不仅形成了“四街四城”八个市级商业中心,不少商业设施,如东方商厦、豫国商城、
“Wen Wei Po” is a big newspaper with international influence and prestige. However, the quality of composing and editing certain articles is really flattering. I chose April 20, 1997 header article analysis, almost every sentence Jieyu disease, compiled here, for public discussion. The language disease can be broadly classified into three categories: First, the words owed when 1, the growth rate of total retail sales of consumer goods in Shanghai, - generally remained at 20%, but the potential of tourism shopping is far from developed. 2, but to really tap the potential in this area, is the common issue of tourism and commerce. 3, Shanghai not only formed a “four streets and four cities” eight city-level commercial centers, many commercial facilities, such as Oriental Plaza, Yu Mall,