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高中课文《猎户》存在着不少语病,举例如下。1.猎罢论功,我的要求不高,最得意是分得一枝两枝雉鸡翎。句中主语“最得意”与宾语“分得一枝两枝雉鸡翎”搭配不当,应在“最得意”后加一个“的”字,使主语变成一个名词性“的”字短语.2.他住得不远,就是那个有三棵老松树的村子,冯岗。句中语病有二:一是主语与宾语搭配不当.宜把第一句中“得”字改为“的”,把第二句中的
There are many linguistic diseases in the high school text “Orion”. Examples are as follows. 1. My hunt for merit, my request is not high, the most proud is to share two sticks of chicken. In the sentence, the subject “the most proud” and the object “having two branches and two chickens” are improperly collocated. After the word “most proud”, the word “” should be added to make the subject become a nominal “” word phrase. He lived not far, that is, the village with three old pine trees, Feng Gang. There are two sentences in the Chinese language: one is that the subject is not properly collocated with the object. It is advisable to change the word “to” in the first sentence to “yes” and put the sentence in the second sentence.