写出考场作文语言的精、气、神

• 作 者: 卜廷才
• 机 构: 江苏省淮安市淮州中学,
• 出 处: 新语文学习.中学教师
• 发表日期: 2006年01期
• 关键词: 考场作文 文学手法 细节描写 放风筝 刘翔 甲乙丙丁 何来 特有形式 孙海平 心理矛盾

一、考场作文语言的“精”:精当、精到和精彩“精当”是文章的语言精确恰当,准确而正确地描述事物,抒发情感,阐明事理。即便使用文学手法,也符合情理或事理。如:“你可以看到:那草地上放风筝的父母和孩子,他们在跑: 那树阴下互相追逐的恋人,他们在跑;公园里

First, the “fineness” of the examination writing language: “done, refined, and wonderful” is the precise and appropriate language of the article, accurately and correctly describe things, express emotions, and clarify the truth. Even if using literary techniques, it is reasonable or reasonable. Such as: "You can see: The parents and children who fly the kites on the grass, they are running: The lovers who chase each other under the shade of trees, they are running; The park