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读者最感兴趣的文章,往往是细节描述很清楚的。哈利·波特是怎么骑在扫帚上的?他的宠物雪鸮是什么样子?……如果没有细节,简单两句话讲完故事,效果当然没有那么精彩啦!★原来的作文★我是一个二年级的学生。一天,天气很冷,我穿了一件很厚很厚的狗熊衣服来到动物园,小妹妹们说一只狗熊出来啦!有一次圣诞节,我穿着一件用帆布做的圣诞老人衣服,一进场就引来哄堂大笑,因为那件衣服很破旧。还有一次万圣节,我用纱布把自己裹成一个木乃伊,一跳一跳的很滑稽。我觉得自己是一个很好玩的人。
Readers are most interested in the article, the details are often very clear description. How did Harry Potter ride on a broom? What did his pet snowball look like? ... If you did not have the details, just finished the story in two sentences, the effect of course is not that exciting! ★ Original composition ★ I am A sophomore One day the weather was cold and I came to the zoo wearing a very thick, thick bear clothes, and the little sister said that a bear came out. Once Christmas I was wearing a Santa Claus suit made of canvas Approach lead to laughter, because that piece of clothing is very old. Another Halloween, I wrap myself up in a mummy with gauze, hopping funny. I think I am a very fun person.