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写作是一件非常自我的事情。离开了自我,写作就会魂不附体。正如周国平先生所言:“在我的写作之国中,我是不容置疑的王!”一、缘由:众里寻“我”千百度对儿童而言,写作文就是在写自己,写自己的想象、自己的快乐、自己的感悟、自己的发现。可是,从大量的儿童习作中,我们却找不到那鲜活的“自我”、“不容置疑的王”。自我意识的沉睡导致了儿童的习作出现了一连串的问题。(一)茫然无“我”雪后的校园真美呀!同学们有的在看书,有的在做游戏。动物们都冬眠了,刺猬、青蛙、小松鼠都不出来了。路上
Writing is a very self. Left self, writing will be irrelevant. As Mr. Zhou Guoping said: “In my writing country, I am the undoubted king!” First, the reason: the public search “I ” thousands of Baidu for children, writing is to write their own, Write your own imagination, your own happiness, your own perception, your own discovery. However, we can not find the vivid “self ”, “the undoubted king ” from a large number of children’s work. The fall of self-awareness led to a series of problems with children’s work. (A) at no “I ” snowy campus beautiful! Some of my classmates reading, and some are doing the game. Animals are hibernating, hedgehogs, frogs, squirrels are not out. On the road