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在1979年的“好新闻”中,有一篇《周末一条街夜市受欢迎》。这则新闻,在报道题材及写作方面是有特色的,但在文字上也有不少毛病。一、标题是《周末一条街夜市受欢迎》,文中介绍的却是鼓楼区商业部门“在山西路广场周围,山西路菜场附近、丁家桥、湖南路一带设立了3个服务供应中心。”是三条街。我想,如改为《周末夜市受欢迎》,就比较贴切了。二,“一位老教师在买到一张波浪式折摺椅后”
In the 1979 Good News, there was an article entitled “Weekend Street Night Market is Popular.” This news story is unique in its coverage of topics and writing, but there are also many problems in writing. First, the title is “Weekend a street night market,” the article is introduced in the Gulou District Commercial Department “around Shanxi Road Square, Shanxi Road near the market, Dingjiaqiao, Hunan Road area set up three service centers.” Is three street. I think, such as “the popular weekend market,” more appropriate. Second, “an old teacher bought a wave-shaped folding chair after”