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一、 审好题
审好题是写好文章的前提。一篇文章不管文字有多优美，行文有多流畅，如果审题上出了问题，肯定不会得高分。考生在2011江苏卷作文审题时，首先要审清图画内容。其次，要审清所给的文字提示,如要求写出“你的感想”和“怎样为家长减负”。如果考生将图画中的人物描写成师生关系，将内容写成如何为学生减负，就离题千里了。
二、 谋好篇
考生在提笔之前，应首先将文章的篇章结构谋划好。篇章结构要简洁、富有层次性，切忌表达混乱。针对这篇文章，考生应将文章分为三段。第一段描述图画，可套用图画描述类常用句型As is vividly shown in the picture, …；第二段写“你的感想”；第三段写“你能为家长减负做些什么”。 这样逐段展开，不仅避免了内容要点遗漏，而且便于阅卷老师轻松找到要点。
三、 设亮点
要点完整，表达正确是一篇文章的基本要求。要想使你的文章“提档升级”，获得高分，写作中必须要使用一定数量的高级词汇和复杂句式，例如：with复合结构、定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句、倒装句、强调句、非谓语动词等。
四、 知标准
了解高考英语书面表达评分标准可以避免考生写作过程中犯一些低级错误，做到心中有数，下笔从容。如评分细则中的主要错误包括：（1） 内容要点遗漏；（2） 句子语法结构错误；（3） 时态错误；（4） 语态错误等。
下面是笔者根据2011江苏卷高考英语作文写的一篇“下水作文”。
As is vividly shown in the picture, on seeing Mom coming back from work, the little girl runs to greet her. It is obvious that Mom feels a little tired after a day’s work. The lovely daughter removes the bag from Mom’s shoulder. Mom is so moved that she kneels down to show her affection for her daughter.
This picture reminds me of my parents who devote themselves to my growth. Compared with the little girl, I feel very guilty. Totally engaged in daily study, I take all their care for granted and seldom can I do anything in return. I always hold the view that it is my responsibility to acquire good academic achievements and be admitted into an ideal university.
Now it is high time that I took action to pay back my parents. To reduce parents’ daily burden, I can help them with some housework, such as washing dishes and mopping the floor.(156 words)
（王明霞，镇江市教研室英语教研员）
审好题是写好文章的前提。一篇文章不管文字有多优美，行文有多流畅，如果审题上出了问题，肯定不会得高分。考生在2011江苏卷作文审题时，首先要审清图画内容。其次，要审清所给的文字提示,如要求写出“你的感想”和“怎样为家长减负”。如果考生将图画中的人物描写成师生关系，将内容写成如何为学生减负，就离题千里了。
二、 谋好篇
考生在提笔之前，应首先将文章的篇章结构谋划好。篇章结构要简洁、富有层次性，切忌表达混乱。针对这篇文章，考生应将文章分为三段。第一段描述图画，可套用图画描述类常用句型As is vividly shown in the picture, …；第二段写“你的感想”；第三段写“你能为家长减负做些什么”。 这样逐段展开，不仅避免了内容要点遗漏，而且便于阅卷老师轻松找到要点。
三、 设亮点
要点完整，表达正确是一篇文章的基本要求。要想使你的文章“提档升级”，获得高分，写作中必须要使用一定数量的高级词汇和复杂句式，例如：with复合结构、定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句、倒装句、强调句、非谓语动词等。
四、 知标准
了解高考英语书面表达评分标准可以避免考生写作过程中犯一些低级错误，做到心中有数，下笔从容。如评分细则中的主要错误包括：（1） 内容要点遗漏；（2） 句子语法结构错误；（3） 时态错误；（4） 语态错误等。
下面是笔者根据2011江苏卷高考英语作文写的一篇“下水作文”。
As is vividly shown in the picture, on seeing Mom coming back from work, the little girl runs to greet her. It is obvious that Mom feels a little tired after a day’s work. The lovely daughter removes the bag from Mom’s shoulder. Mom is so moved that she kneels down to show her affection for her daughter.
This picture reminds me of my parents who devote themselves to my growth. Compared with the little girl, I feel very guilty. Totally engaged in daily study, I take all their care for granted and seldom can I do anything in return. I always hold the view that it is my responsibility to acquire good academic achievements and be admitted into an ideal university.
Now it is high time that I took action to pay back my parents. To reduce parents’ daily burden, I can help them with some housework, such as washing dishes and mopping the floor.(156 words)
（王明霞，镇江市教研室英语教研员）