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(龟兔之后加上“赛跑”二字,以体现故事新编的特点,且扣合文章内容。)话说兔子因为轻敌,从而被乌龟打败。乌龟从此平步青云,连××公司都来找其当品牌代言人,真是一步登天,从此过上了纸醉金迷,(应为顿号)一掷千金的“土豪”生活。反观兔子,在兔界声名狼藉,如落水狗般,惶惶不可终日(指心慌意乱,神不守舍,一天也过不下去了。形容惊恐到了极点。与后面“闷”的状态不协调)地闷在家中,就这样,每天还有许多兔界人士在网上发帖辱骂之(使用文言词语,风格不协调),搞的(应为“得”)兔子里外
(After the tortoise and rabbit, add the word “race” to reflect the new features of the story, and buckle the contents of the article.) Rabbit because of the undefeated, which was defeated by a tortoise. Since then, the turtle skyrocket, and even × × companies have come to find its brand ambassador, is really a step to heaven, and then put on a heap of gold, (should be a comma) Deal or No Deal “Tycoon ” life. The other hand, the rabbit, infamous in the rabbit community, such as falling into the watery dog, panic all day long (referring to distracted, unsure, one day also not go down .Described frightened to the extreme. And back “boring ” state incompatible) boring at home , So, every day there are many people in the world posting abusive online (using the language of classical style, style is not coordinated), engage in (should “get ”) inside and outside the rabbit