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大部分初中生对写景作文都感觉无从下手,比如写到自然风景,就是群山巍峨、流水潺潺、炊烟袅袅、田园风光等等,都是一些套路,仿佛天下的美景都是一个样子。要解决这个问题,我们必须回归基础,加强观察能力训练,抓住写作对象的细节,表现对象的特点。写的时候也要注意一些方法,比如点面的结合、空间顺序的安排、修辞手法的合理运用等等。本期所选的文章,写的是人文景观,总体来看好像不错,一经分析,你会发现因为
Most junior high school students are unable to get started with the writing of scenery. For example, when they write about the natural scenery, they are lofty mountains, gurgling water, smoke curling, idyllic scenery and so on. They are all routines, as if all the beautiful scenery in the world is like one. To solve this problem, we must return to the foundation, strengthen the observation of ability training, grasp the details of the object of writing and show the characteristics of the object. When writing should also pay attention to some methods, such as the combination of point of view, the spatial order of the arrangement, the rational use of rhetorical devices and so on. Selected articles of this issue, is written in cultural landscape, on the whole looks good, once analyzed, you will find because