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病文展示请以“窗外”为题,写一篇作文,立意自定,题目自拟,文体不限,不少于600字。窗外★江苏省苏州浒墅关中学初三(4)班张婷婷总是习惯性地站起身子,往窗外一瞥,望着形形色色的行人穿过人行横道,就像是一只只觅食的蚂蚁。(开篇点题,简洁明了,但句子有语病。)在这繁忙的街道中,却有一个那么安静的角落,整个冬天的夜晚,都不曾消失过。(此外“繁忙”与“安静”相对,以及时间的交代,都是为下文“我”的观察作铺垫。)那是一个在夜市上摆地摊的藏族小姑娘。她穿着一身厚厚的藏族服装,脖子上挂着沉甸甸的挂饰,
Disease display to “window” as a title, write an essay, self-determined, subject self-styled, style is not limited, not less than 600 words. Outside the window ★ Jiangsu Hushuguang secondary three classes (4) Zhang Tingting always habitually stood up, looking out the window, looking at all kinds of pedestrians cross the crosswalk, like a feeding flies ants. (Beginning questions, concise, but sentences have speech disease.) In this busy street, but there is a quiet corner, the winter night, have not disappeared. (In addition, “busy” and “quiet” relative, as well as the timing of the account, are for the following “I ” look paved the way.) That is a stall in the night market Tibetan girl. She was wearing a thick Tibetan costume, hanging heavy neck ornaments,