文章的基本要求与最高要求

• 作 者: 姚卫伟
• 出 处: 全国优秀作文选(初中)
• 发表日期: 2015年Z2期
• 关键词: 上海市长 夏丏尊 文心 文件材料 王彬彬 中小学阶段 南京大学教授 不连贯 张志公

前不久,《文汇读书周报》上的一篇短文《语文老师朱镕基》引起了许多读者的兴趣。朱镕基并没有做语文教师的经历。原来他任上海市长时,发现市政府相关部门送来的文件材料常有文不从字不顺的现象,朱镕基总是用笔一一加以改正。文不从字不顺,说白了就是语言的不通与表达的混乱。这样的情况当然不是今天才有,早在民国时期,夏丏尊与叶圣陶合著的《文心》一书就指出过同样的问题,并列举当时政府文告中的病句:“此十余年

Not long ago, a short essay entitled ”Chinese Teacher Zhu Rongji“ in the Wen Wei Book Review caught the attention of many readers. Zhu Rongji did not have the experience of a language teacher. When he was the mayor of Shanghai, he found out that the documents and materials sent by the relevant departments of the municipal government were often outdated. Zhu Rongji always corrected the situation with his pen. The text is not smooth from the word, to put it plainly is the barrier of language and the expression of chaos. Of course, this is not the case today. As early as during the Republican period, Wen Xin, co-written by Xia Zun-zun and Ye Shengtao, pointed out the same problem and cite the ill-posed sentences in the government’s statement at the time: ”This is more than ten years