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新编义务教材初中语文第二册《人民英雄永垂不朽》一文,作者以其行踪“进入广场前→越过广场→踏上台阶→走下台阶”为线索,组织材料。谋篇布局,外以方位为序,详细地向读者介绍了巍峨、雄伟、庄严的人民英雄纪念碑,给读者以脉络清晰、条理井然之美感。但其中那“越过广场”后才能“瞻仰纪念碑”的说法却叫人怎么读来渎去,也总觉之不妥。 其一,纪念碑本在广场之内,而文中说“越过广场”,才“走列纪念碑前”,这不是等于说纪念碑在广场之外吗?其言所述,不合事理。致使那些远离北
Newly drafted compulsory textbooks for junior high school The second volume, “The People’s Heroes Are Immortal,” wrote the author’s whereabouts, “in front of the square → cross the square → step on the stairs → walk down the stairs” as clues to organize materials. The layout of the book and the orientation of the outside are introduced in order to introduce readers to the readers in detail the magnificent, majestic and solemn Monument to the People’s Heroes, giving readers a clear and orderly sense of beauty. However, the expression “looking over the monument” after “crossing the square” made people feel that it was not proper to read it. For one thing, the monument is in the square, and the text says “crossing the square” before “walking out of the monument.” Isn’t this equal to saying that the monument is outside the square? What it says is unreasonable. Cause those far away from the north