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暑假一天的下午,我和爸爸妈妈一起去上海的东方明珠游玩,我可高兴了!(自然的开头)听说东方明珠电视塔,高468米,是亚洲第一、世界第三高塔。设计者将十一个大小不一、高低错落的球体通过三根直径九米的擎天立柱串联起来,充满了“大珠小珠落玉盘”的诗情画意。今天能有机会见到它,也算大饱眼福了。可远远望去,这座塔好像一点也不高大雄伟,可近看,它高耸入云、雄伟壮观,塔上华灯高照,美丽极了。塔下人山人海,热闹非凡。(本节交代得很仔细,不错)我和爸爸妈妈买好票后,就坐着电梯上去了,刚开始,我有点害怕(真切),可妈妈对我说:“别害怕,你不是很勇敢吗?”听了妈妈的鼓励后,我渐渐不害怕了,这时,电梯到了第一个球体,我看见行人像蚂蚁似的密密麻麻地走在大街上,可有趣了!再看看宽敞的大厅,里面金碧辉煌、光彩
Summer afternoon, I and my parents go to Shanghai Oriental Pearl to play, I am happy! (Natural beginning) I heard Oriental Pearl TV Tower, 468 meters high, is Asia, the world’s third tower. The designer will be eleven different sizes, the level of scattered balls through the three diameter nine meters of Optimus Prime column in series, filled with “beads drop beads” poetic. Today can have the opportunity to see it, also considered a feast for the eyes. Can be seen from afar, this tower does not seem tall and majestic at ease, can be close look, it towering into the sky, majestic, tower Shanghua Dengzhao, beautiful. Tower under the sea of people, crowded. (This section explains carefully, good) I and mom and dad bought the tickets, they sat up on the elevator, at first, I am a bit scared (really), but my mother said to me: “Do not be afraid, are not you brave? ? ”After listening to my mother’s encouragement, I gradually do not be afraid, then, the elevator to the first ball, I saw pedestrians like ants walking densely on the street, can be fun! Look at the spacious hall , Which magnificent, brilliant