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【编辑点评】《长大》写得空灵、跳跃,很有意思。作者以散文诗的笔调,一波三折地写出了长大这个主题。小女生的语气很轻快,又有一种不饶人的刨根问底,问父母、问朋友、问心等,这些像“传球”一样的问询变换,使文章显得跌宕多姿。通过一连串的生活流,描述和回答长大是什么,这种生活流包括一系列初中生活中有代表性的形象镜头。其中,作者又很智慧地嵌入了种种对照,将长大的感觉描述得更加丰满真实。文章还很自然地融进了调侃和幽默,如“你可以牵个男朋友啊”“正经点”
[Edit Comment] “grow up” written ethereal, jumping, very interesting. The author wrote the theme of growing up twists and turns in the style of prose poetry. The tone of the little girl is very light, there is a kind of asking for questions, asking parents, asking friends, asking questions, etc., such as “pass” the same inquiry transformation, make the article look ups and downs. Describe and answer what it is like to grow up through a series of streams of life that include a representative series of images of life in junior high school. Among them, the author is also very smart to embed all sorts of contrast, will grow up feeling described more plump real. The article is still naturally into the ridicule and humor, such as “You can hold a boyfriend ah ” “Sutra point ”