具体生动 笔底生花——谈中考作文如何写得具体生动

• 作 者: 韩中年
• 机 构: 文水城镇中学,
• 出 处: 新课程(初中版)
• 发表日期: 2006年04期
• 关键词: 细节描写 无尘 最后一课 都德 生动感人 一粒米 文中 无边无垠 生活细节 改革创新

中考作文各有致胜之道,但具体生动、笔底生花,却是重要一筹。如何把中考作文写得具体生动,让笔底生花?1.巧加修饰语先看三句话:①一枝粉笔。②一枝白粉笔。③一枝无尘的白粉笔。这三句话,①说明粉笔的数量;②还说明粉笔的颜色;③还说明粉笔的质量。一句比一句具体生动,原因是巧加了修饰语。所以要把文章写得具体生动,就要巧妙地加一些修饰语。如“老师”前面可加“和蔼可亲的”、“慈祥

The essay in the high school entrance exam has its own way to victory, but it is an important one, but it is vivid and lively. How to write a essay in a specific and vivid, so that the bottom of the flower? 1. Add a modifier to see three words: 1 a piece of chalk. 2 pieces of white chalk. 3 a clean white chalk. These three sentences, 1 indicates the number of chalk; 2 also indicates the color of the chalk; 3 also indicates the quality of the chalk. A sentence is more vivid than a sentence, because the clever addition of modifiers. Therefore, if you want to write the article vividly, you must skillfully add some modifiers. Such as “teachers” can be added in front of “friendly” and “kind”