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作文里生活太少,甚至没有生活,是当下学生写作的通病。学生作文背离生活而缺少生活之魂,造成的原因很多,主要大致有以下三个方面:写作是为了应试,这必然导致学生屏蔽对生活的关注;受写作和评价以“立意为先”的影响,学生作文中难觅真实生活;教师多从写的角度研究和指导作文,偏重于讲写的方法技巧,学生也偏重于学写的方法技巧,却常常陷于“巧妇难为无米之炊”的窘境,不能有效地提高写作能力。要唤回作文的生活之魂,需要重建回归生活的写作
Life in the essay is too small, even without life, which is a common problem in current student writing. Student writing deviates from life and lacks the soul of life. There are many reasons for this. There are mainly three main aspects: Writing is for exams, which inevitably leads students to shield their attention to life; they are influenced by writing and evaluation as “conception first”. In the students’ writing, it is difficult to live a real life; teachers mostly study and guide the composition from the perspective of writing, emphasis on the methods and techniques of writing, and students also emphasize on the methods and techniques of writing, but are often trapped in the dilemma of “the miracle is difficult for women to be without rice”. Cannot effectively improve writing skills. To call back the soul of the life of the composition, you need to rebuild the writing that goes back to life.