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一、关于立意师:我们都知道立意是一篇文章的灵魂。师:那什么是立意呢?立意是一篇文章的主旨,是一篇文章表达的主要情感,或获得的关于生命、生活的启示。师:立意通常在文章的哪个地方点明?生:结尾。师:平常的作文练习中,我发现很多同学的结尾做得并不好,要么不够深刻,要么表达不美,今天这节课,我们通过班上同学的作文一起来学习如何巧妙运用结尾使文章的立意达到深刻、美。二、由事及理,立意升格师:首先看李健长同学的《青春里,我需要享受过程》,它有A、B两个结尾,我们一起来读一下。A结尾:原来无限风光不一定在险峰
I. About the Idea Division: We all know that the idea is the soul of an article. Teacher: What is the idea? The idea is the main theme of an article, the main emotion expressed in an article, or the revelation about life and life. Teacher: The idea is usually found somewhere in the article: Health: the end. Teacher: In the usual essay practice, I found that many classmates did not do a good job at the end, either they were not profound enough, or they did not express themselves. In this class today, we learned how to cleverly use the ending to make the article through the composition of the classmates. The concept is profound and beautiful. Second, by the matter and reason, intends to upgrade the teacher: First of all, look at Li Jianchang’s students, “In youth, I need to enjoy the process,” it has A, B two ends, we read together. A ending: The original scenery is not necessarily in the dangerous peak