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失误点击本文以自己的北大梦想作为题材,内容还是不错的。行文时,从对北大的渴望之情,写到游览北大的所见所感,思路也较为清晰。遗憾的是,考生注重了对追梦过程的叙述,却忽视了对语言的美化,不仅没有形象地描写出北大独特的校园景观,对其深厚的文化底蕴也缺少挖掘,让人感觉北大校园与我们的校园似乎没有多大差别。既然无法展示出北大独特的魅力,那主题表达也就大为失色了。另外,开篇与结尾是文章的关键处,可
Click on this error to his dream Beijing University as a theme, the content is still good. When writing, from the longing for Peking University, Peking University, wrote the feeling of what to see, the idea is clearer. Unfortunately, the candidates focus on the narration of the dream-catching process, but ignore the beautification of the language. They not only vividly depict the unique campus landscape of Peking University, but also lack the excavation of its profound cultural heritage, making people feel that Peking University Campus It seems that our campus is not much difference. Since the unique charm of Peking University can not be demonstrated, the expression of the theme is also greatly diminished. In addition, the opening and closing of the article is the key, but