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有个同学在一篇谈环保的作文中这样写道:前美国副总统戈尔先生曾经是下一届的美国总统,现在为了我们的生存环境,他在全世界做演讲,为的就是要我们意识到地球母亲的环境问题有多么严重。其中第一个句子明显有毛病。“前美国副总统”语序不当,“美国”只有一个,无所谓前后,副总统则是有前任和现任之分;问题还不止于此,“前副总统曾经是下一届的美国总统”说法矛盾,“下一届”还未到怎能说“曾经”?结合句意,不如改
One classmate wrote in an article about environmental protection: The former U.S. Vice President, Mr. Gore, was the next President of the United States. Now, for the sake of our living environment, he gives lectures all over the world. It is for us. Realize how serious the Earth Mother’s environmental problems are. The first sentence was clearly faulty. “The former U.S. Vice President” was not in the correct word order, “U.S.” had only one, and there was no difference between the former and the former. The vice president had the predecessor and the current one; the problem was not limited to this, “the former vice president was the next The U.S. President’s ”contradiction,“ ”How can I say “” once " in the next session?