2013年第9期改联选登

• 出 处: 对联(民间对联故事)(下半月)
• 发表日期: 2013年12期
• 关键词: 德栽 改联 载物 志高 李桃 承先 中国梦 陈一 竞相绽放 李存

原联:依富乐,傍三江,志存高远,师生当自强不息;修品性。诺千金,仁爱搏大,君子以厚德栽物。病症:平仄严重失律;“志存”与“仁爱”、“师生”与“君子”结构不同;“自强不息”与“厚德载物”词性不同。改联:依富乐,傍三江,志存高远,学子当自强不息;

The original line: according to Fuller, near the three rivers, ambitious, teachers and students should be self-improvement; Connaught gold, benevolent love big, gentlemen to Houdezaiwu. Symptoms: the level of Chek serious loss of law; “Chi” and “benevolence”, “teacher” and “gentleman” structure is different; “self-improvement” and “virtue” "part of speech different. Change the connection: according to Fuller, near Sanjiang, ambitious, students self-improvement;