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行书白居易《西湖晚归回望孤山寺赠诸客》董大华(江苏):此件行草条幅,布局合理,用笔自然流畅,从整体上看是一件比较好的作品。这说明作者对行草是下过一些工夫的,已具备了一定的创作能力。但也出现了一些失误,其一,凡带有竖画的字,作者往往习惯性地都把竖画拉长。虽然在拉长竖画的时候,作者也注意到其中的变化,但作品中还是没有避开重复的现象。如“到”、“中”。一般来讲,长竖画在一篇字中出现一笔为佳,出现二笔以上,很容易破坏作品的整体效果。由此类推,也请作者注意长笔画的变化。如“楼”、“处”、“人”等等。
Writing Book Bai Juyi “West Lake late return to Gushan Temple donated all guests” Dong Dahua (Jiangsu): This piece of grass banners, rational layout, pen natural and fluent, as a whole is a relatively good work. This shows that the author of the line of grass is some time ago, already have a certain creative ability. However, there have also been some mistakes. First, all the characters with vertical paintings tend to elongate vertical paintings habitually. Although the author noticed the changes while lengthening the vertical paintings, the works did not avoid repetition. Such as “to ”, “in ”. In general, the long vertical painting appears in a piece of a better, more than two pen appears, it is easy to undermine the overall effect of the work. And so on, but also the author pay attention to changes in long strokes. Such as “building ”, “office ”, “person ” and so on.