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一首先要说明的是,这里谈到的作文是中学生中一些好的和比较好的作文。用“文风”一词来说中学生的作文似乎太重了,但是从我这几年读到的各种考场作文、竞赛得奖作文和刊登在报纸杂志上的一些“优秀作文”看,文风问题确实存在。请看下面一段文字:为人之理在于疏,汲汲于名利的人,只顾争名,不懂安然遁世,戚戚于富贵的人,不懂钱财乃身外之物。这是一篇登载于某报的叫《疏》的“好文章”。再请看另一段:临渊羡鱼不如退而结网,洋洋止沸不如釜底抽薪,活得干脆。这也是一篇刊登在报纸上的“范文”。两篇文章的共同特点是用半文半白的文字故作深沉,大谈人生感悟,摆出一副旷达的样子。但给
One of the first things to note is that the composition mentioned here is some of the good and relatively good composition of middle school students. The composition of the middle school student seems to be too heavy with the word “Wenfeng”, but from the various exam venues that I have read in recent years, there are compositions, competitions, award compositions, and some “excellent compositions” published in newspapers and magazines. Look, the issue of style does exist. Please read the following paragraph: The reason is that people are sparse, those who fall into the fame and fortune, only want to fight for names, do not understand Enron’s death, and those who are rich in wealth don’t understand that money is a thing outside of the world. This is a “good article” called “Shu” published in a newspaper. Let’s look at another paragraph: Linyuan’s squid is not as good as retiring and netting. This is also a “Model Essay” published in the newspaper. The common feature of the two articles is to use the half-white and white text to pretend to be profound, to talk about life and to put it in a sly manner. But give