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一天下午,我把学生的每周自由练笔作文拿回家里细心批阅着。焦躁慢慢涌上心头,我甚至恼怒了。平常的作文指导,我是那样认真!看看眼下的作文,语句不通、结构混乱。但我还是耐着性子翻阅、评点着。我翻开了又一篇作文,题目叫“一生的感动”。才读小学六年级的学生,何来“一生”的感动,搞得自己好像历经沧桑似的。暂且看看到底是怎么回事吧!“不知是因为我太多愁善感,还是因为这个年龄本来就容易感动。总之,简简单单的八个字换来了我一生的感动。”哪八个字会有如此的分量?“记得那一堂作文讲评课,语文老师用他
One afternoon, I took the students’ free practice weekly writing home carefully read. Anxiety slowly in my heart, I was even angry. Ordinary composition guide, I was so serious! Look at the current composition, the sentence does not work, the structure of confusion. But I still patiently read, commented. I opened another essay, the title called ”touched by life “. Only sixth grade students in primary school, where to ”life “ moved, and made myself seem to have gone through vicissitudes. For the time being see what is going on in the end! ”“ I do not know because I am too sentimental, or because this age would have been very easy to move in. In short, the simple eight characters in exchange for my life’s move. ”“ Which eight Words have such a weight? ”Remember that one composition commentary class, language teacher with him