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同学少年您说好的作文是没有模式的?是这样。有一年高考结束后,一个朋友找到我,让我给他的孩子预估一下高考作文成绩。我让孩子把作文大概复述一下,不料他一口气背了出来,背完还不忘加上一句“老师让我们这样写的”——开头、结尾、行文构思,老师都给出了严格的模式。这个孩子是市重点高中的高材生,但他这篇作文充其量也就是中等文的水平:立意平庸,语言干瘪。他的才情,他的智慧,他的见地,他的如闪电、如雷霆、如流星飞窜、如骄阳四射的思想火花到哪里去了?
Is there any model for classmates’ good essay? That’s it. One year after the college entrance examination ended, a friend to find me, let me give his child to estimate college entrance essay scores. I let the children about the composition of the retreat about, unexpectedly, he breath back out, do not forget to add the last sentence, “the teacher let us write” - beginning, ending, writing ideas, the teacher gave a strict Mode. The child is a top student in the city’s key high school, but his essay is, at best, a medium level: mediocre mediocrity and languid language. His talent, his wisdom, his insight, his lightning, such as Thunder, such as meteor flying, such as the spark of the sun where the go?