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本文是一篇较优秀的考场议论文。考场作文要想取得优异成绩,首要的是应试者正确理解作文材料的题意,按命题者的要求进行构思与写作。此文的主旨“带着勇气,抛掉顾虑”是符合作文试题所供材料含意的。试题所供材料内容丰富,含意很多,像勇于承担风险,艺高亦要胆大,经验、技术可贵勇气更佳,消除顾虑勇于尝试,不计得失专注做事等等,皆是作文的选题范围。此文选择“带着勇气,抛掉顾虑”这个侧面进行立意构思,是切合试题写作要求的。这是考场作文首先要达到的必要条件。本文的突出特点是论点非常鲜明,论证非常周密,论据非常典型、非常突出。作者为了论证“带着勇气,抛掉顾虑”这个中心论点,选用三个生动事例为论据加强论述,其一,张朝阳带着无上勇
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