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升格后的作文,虽然用的还是升格前作文的材料,但提升了升格前作文的主旨——从警觉和忧患的角度说和谐,还提升了升格前作文的表现形式——一个完整的寓言故事。但是,升格后的作文还可再升格:应将“冬虫”作为积极预防危机的角色来写——在冬天到来之前到“地下”避开风雪,再同“夏草”和谐共处。这样就在预防显性危机(稻草人)的基础上上升到预防隐性危机(即将来临的冬天风雪)的层面。
Although the composition of the upgraded composition is still used to enhance the composition of the pre-essay composition, it enhances the main theme of the pre-upgrade composition--from the point of view of vigilance and anxiety, and also enhances the expression of the pre-upgrade composition--a complete fable. . However, after the promotion, the composition can be upgraded again: “Waxworm” should be written as an active role in preventing crises. Before the arrival of winter, it should avoid the blizzard by “underground” and then coexist in harmony with “Summer Grass.” This will rise from the prevention of explicit crisis (scarecrow) to the prevention of recessive crisis (coming winter snow and snow).