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夜正温柔,心还沉默,遥天星子倏滑落。长衣轻裹怯秋凉,为谁独伫街之末?青涩年华,阑珊灯火,回眸不复当年我。疾轮碾过叶纷纷,一笛冷韵东风破。(2015、5《中华诗词》)宋彩霞点评:诗重发端,惟词亦然。开头贵突兀笼罩,对起之调,贵从容整炼。开句“夜正温柔,心还沉默”正如是,与少游“山抹微云,天粘衰草”异曲同工。词不在大小深浅,贵于移情,有点,有染。“为谁”二句乃就上三句意染之,点染之间,语言不相隔。“为谁独伫街之末?”以曲折问而收之,深得婉字之妙。吞吐之
The night is gentle, the heart is still silent, distant stars falling down. Dressing light wrapped in fear autumn cool, who alone Street? Green astringent, dim light, review of the year I am not. Wheel run over the leaves have a whirlwind ruddy Dongfeng broken. (2015,5 “Chinese Poetry”) Song Caixia Comments: Poetry reappears, but the word is true. At the beginning of extraordinarily expensive envelopes, from the tone, you calmly refining. Open sentence “The night is gentle, the heart is silent ” As is, and less tour “Shan Wei Wei Yun, days sticky” different kinds of work. The word is not in the size of shades, more than empathy, a little, with dyed. “For whom ” two sentence is the meaning of the sentence on the three sentences, between the point dyeing, the language is not separated. “For who alone Street?” "To twists and turns and receive it, won the wonderful word of the word. Huff handling