命题作文“把门敞开”导写及佳作示例

• 作 者: 凌志
• 出 处: 中学生优秀作文(高中版)
• 发表日期: 2013年Z2期
• 关键词: 命题作文 文章语言 史铁生 摇摇头 心灵之门 言在 孤绝 社会生活 小混混 三人行

文题一首老歌中有这样一句歌词:“把门儿打开,让阳光进来。”其实,敞开门,得到的何止是阳光,拥抱的简直是整个世界。请以“把门敞开”为题,写一篇不少于800字的作文,不能写成诗歌。写作作指导1.审题:“门”意味紧闭,“把门敞开”意味“与外界或相互间交流、接纳、公开、通畅”。先定位“门”的比喻意,从反面发散思考“门”这个概念

In an old song, there is a song like this: “Open the door and let the sun come in.” Actually, when you open the door, you get more than sunshine and embrace the whole world. Please “open the door ” as a title, write a composition of not less than 800 words, can not be written poetry. Writing guide 1. Examination questions: “door ” means closed, “open the door ” means “communicate with the outside world or with each other, accept, open, open ”. First positioning “door ” metaphor, from the opposite divergent thinking “door ” the concept