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二、要紧紧围绕中心选材 [存在问题] 高年级学生,中等以上程度的,经过几年的作文训练,能写得内容具体了。一些学习态度认真的学生,不怕累,一写就是一大篇。然而,论质量,仍不算是优等文。缺陷在哪里呢?主要表现是材料一大堆,中心却表达得不明确。 随着学习的深入,练习“用一组内容谋篇”时,围绕中心选材的问题更突出了。什么叫围绕中心选材?为什么要用一组内容谋篇?怎样做才算是突出了中心思想?这些难点,拦住了他们作文学习
Second, we must focus on the center of the material selection [problems] high school students, more than secondary level, after several years of essay training, can be written specifically. Some serious attitude of students, not afraid of tired, write is a big story. However, quality is still not a good text. Where are the shortcomings? The main performance is a lot of material, the center has not expressed clearly. With the deepening of learning, the issue of material selection around the center is even more prominent when practicing “finding articles with one set of contents.” What is the central selection of materials? Why use a set of contents to seek articles? What to do is to highlight the central idea? These difficulties stopped them writing learning