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[作文指导] 题目精析:“身材”,指一个人的高矮胖瘦;“长相”,指一个人面部的样子;“衣着”,指一个人的穿戴。这些都属于人物的外貌。练习题中的省略号,意思是除了“兴趣、爱好”以外,其他方面也可以写,比如品质、性格等。这次练习还要求做到内容具体、语句通顺、书写工整、不写错别字。重点指导:从要求来看,本次作文既要写人物的外貌,又要写人物的兴趣、爱好或品质等方面的特点。描写人物的外貌,要抓住特点。每一个人的外貌都有一定的特点,只有把特点表现出来了,外貌描写才能算是成功的,否则,千人一面,就没有意义了。此外,外貌描写要有目的,也就是要为中心思想服务。比如说,文章要表现人物活泼、大方的特点,那么外貌描写就要能体现出“活泼、大方”的特点。
[Composition Guide] Subject analysis: “figure” refers to a person's height fat and thin; “looks”, refers to a person's face look; “clothing” refers to a person's wear. These belong to the appearance of the characters. Ellipsis in exercises means that in addition to “interest, hobbies,” other aspects can also be written, such as quality, character and so on. This exercise also requires that the content be specific, clear sentences, well written and not typo. Key guidance: From the requirements of view, this essay not only to write the appearance of the characters, but also to write the characters' interests, hobbies or quality aspects of the characteristics. Describe the appearance of people, to seize the characteristics. Everyone's appearance has certain characteristics, and only the characteristics of the performance, appearance description can be considered successful, otherwise, one thousand people, there is no point. In addition, the description of the appearance of purpose, that is, to serve the central idea. For example, the article to show characters lively, generous features, then the description of the appearance should be able to reflect the “lively, generous” features.