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纵观本期《作文世界》中年级作文,有一个非常明显的特点,即:小作者们都非常大胆,敢于拿起笔,写自己的所见所闻所想,在内容上呈现出了丰富多彩的可喜景象。徐少梅的《讨价还价》记叙了小作者买衣服的经过：小作者小小年纪,砍价的本领却不小,甚至可以说比大人还精,一套衣服从380元砍到180元。市场经济给人们的现实生活和传统观念带来了很多的变化,小朋友们也不例外,难怪小作者最后要感叹了：“我们也要从小学会讨价还价,适应市场经济的需要。”这是一件可喜的事情。过生日,每个小朋友都曾经经历过,但以此为题材写成好作文的却不多,主要是经历平淡,写不出特色来。杨晨晓的《一张照片》却写出了个性：妈妈下岗多时,爸爸的单位里也发不出工资了,而“我”的生日又到了,而且是十岁的生日,怎么过呢？小作者最后过了一个非常有意义的生日：去照相馆照了一张相。面对这张照片,小作者真有很多的感想：“每当我拿起这张照片的时候,我总是在提醒自己要节约每一分钱,做一个生活俭朴的人。我将永远保存着这张照片,因为它使我长大了,成熟了。”我相信小读者们通过阅读杨晨晓的作文也会慢慢走向成熟的。可见,题材就在身边,就看你怎么去挖掘,去提炼了,愿所有的小朋友都做个有心人,写出好作文。
Throughout this issue of “composition world” middle-grade composition, there is a very obvious feature: that the small authors are very bold, dare to pick up the pen, write what you see and hear the thought, in the content showed a rich and colorful The gratifying scene. Xu Shaomei's “bargaining” recounts the passage of a small writer's clothes: a small young author, bargaining ability is not small, or even better than adults, a set of clothes cut from 380 yuan to 180 yuan. The market economy has brought a lot of changes to people's real life and traditional concepts. Children are no exception. No wonder the little author finally laments: “We also need to bargain from a young age to meet the needs of a market economy.” This is a Good thing. Birthday, every child has experienced, but as a subject written in good essay but not much, mainly experienced the plain, can not write features. Yang Chenxiao's “a photo” has written a personality: Mom laid off a long time, my father's unit also failed to pay wages, and “I” birthday has arrived, and is 10 years old birthday, how to live? The author finally passed a very meaningful birthday: a photo taken to the photo studio. In the face of this photo, the author has a lot of thoughts: “Whenever I pick up this photo, I always remind myself to save every penny, to be a frugal person in life.I will always save This photo because it made me grow up and matured. ”I believe young readers will also gradually mature by reading Yang Chenxiao's essay. Visible, the subject is around, to see how you dig, to refining, and all children are willing to be considerate, write a good essay.