感动——贾志敏老师作文课赏析

• 作 者: 吴琳
• 出 处: 黑龙江教育(小学文选)
• 发表日期: 2008年Z2期
• 关键词: 作文课 听课者 羚羊挂角 作文评改 想象作文 语言运用 课堂作文 写作方法 系列节目 上海电视台

不久前,有幸聆听了贾志敏老师执教的作文课《感动》,与曾经听过的许多作文课不同,无论指导还是讲评,贾老师都凭借极好的语感和丰富的作文教学经验,令学生一路进步,令听课者啧啧叹服。贾老师让学生感悟写法,合理想象,却做得羚羊挂角,风过无痕;他对学生的习作即兴评改,客观评价,却能令你在笑声中感受语言运用之妙,在字斟句酌的修改中学习作文之道。

Not long ago, I was fortunate enough to have listened to the “Touching” lesson taught by Mr. Jia Zhimin. Unlike many composition lessons that I’ve heard before, regardless of guidance or commentary, Jia teachers have made great progress with their excellent language and rich composition teaching experience. , so that listeners were impressed. Jia taught students how to write and think rationally, but he did an antelope to show his horns. There was no trace of the wind; he assessed students’ improvisations and made objective assessments, but he can feel the joy of using language in his laughter. Modify the way to learn composition.