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Everyone has his dream， so do I. I always try my best to do everything， no matter what result it will have. But I usually want to do everything well， so I can’t focus on one thing， which is a big headache for me.
In many classmates’ eyes， everything about study may be easy for me， but they don’t know that I also have my own growing pains. Sometimes they don’t know， as a matter of fact， how anxious I am about my study， and I always feel like crying when I think about my life. It’s difficult to achieve all the goals that I have set， but I never say “give up”， and I must continue trying my best to be successful. Life is just like a battle， tough and challenging.
I believe that I can accomplish all my dreams sooner or later， even though there is still a long way to go. When feeling down， I always say to myself， “Come on， take one more step！” A simple sentence can tend to cheer me up and make me full of energy. In a word， I’ll never give up， because I have a belief that I can do everything well as long as I would like to try. Rome was not built in a day. Also，success can’t be achieved in a flash.
The society is a college where there is always full of ups and downs， which makes all of us tired. But what can we do to change it？ Can we feel frightened or lose heart？ Should we regret being brought to this world by our parents？ Or， should we be beaten by failures again and again？ Of course not！No matter what difficulties there are， I will be courageous and move forward. There is no better education than adversity. To be successful， we have to undergo countless hardships.
My mood is just like wind， sometimes I really feel very happy， but other times I do feel a little nervous and sad. No one knows the reason， including myself， I like thinking why life shouldn’t be about doing what I love and how we can be really good at something that we don’t enjoy， but the answer is always the same-it’s my responsibility.
Easier said than done， and to put one’s thoughts into action is the most difficult thing in the world. I can think about something， but I can’t do it， such is my life. Every day is beautiful though painful. I love myself， I love my life， and I love the world though sometimes it’s dark.
Big big world， big big me； warm warm heart conquers everything.
曾宪伟老师点评：
From the lines of your article， I can read out growing pains and confidence of a top student. To be a top student and keep the first-class position， it’s really not an easy thing. Not very intelligent as you are， you have never said “give up” to your study and life. On the contrary， you have been working hard and trying your best to achieve your dreams， which is just the reason why I value you and consider you as a trustworthy person. The facts have proved that you are an extraordinary girl that can bear great hardships and overcome any difficulty. I am fully convinced that if you can hold on to your dream and stay optimistic and cheerful， you are sure to accomplish something great and have a nice life.
Finally， what I want to tell you is that it’s your shining smile that impresses me most.
In many classmates’ eyes， everything about study may be easy for me， but they don’t know that I also have my own growing pains. Sometimes they don’t know， as a matter of fact， how anxious I am about my study， and I always feel like crying when I think about my life. It’s difficult to achieve all the goals that I have set， but I never say “give up”， and I must continue trying my best to be successful. Life is just like a battle， tough and challenging.
I believe that I can accomplish all my dreams sooner or later， even though there is still a long way to go. When feeling down， I always say to myself， “Come on， take one more step！” A simple sentence can tend to cheer me up and make me full of energy. In a word， I’ll never give up， because I have a belief that I can do everything well as long as I would like to try. Rome was not built in a day. Also，success can’t be achieved in a flash.
The society is a college where there is always full of ups and downs， which makes all of us tired. But what can we do to change it？ Can we feel frightened or lose heart？ Should we regret being brought to this world by our parents？ Or， should we be beaten by failures again and again？ Of course not！No matter what difficulties there are， I will be courageous and move forward. There is no better education than adversity. To be successful， we have to undergo countless hardships.
My mood is just like wind， sometimes I really feel very happy， but other times I do feel a little nervous and sad. No one knows the reason， including myself， I like thinking why life shouldn’t be about doing what I love and how we can be really good at something that we don’t enjoy， but the answer is always the same-it’s my responsibility.
Easier said than done， and to put one’s thoughts into action is the most difficult thing in the world. I can think about something， but I can’t do it， such is my life. Every day is beautiful though painful. I love myself， I love my life， and I love the world though sometimes it’s dark.
Big big world， big big me； warm warm heart conquers everything.
曾宪伟老师点评：
From the lines of your article， I can read out growing pains and confidence of a top student. To be a top student and keep the first-class position， it’s really not an easy thing. Not very intelligent as you are， you have never said “give up” to your study and life. On the contrary， you have been working hard and trying your best to achieve your dreams， which is just the reason why I value you and consider you as a trustworthy person. The facts have proved that you are an extraordinary girl that can bear great hardships and overcome any difficulty. I am fully convinced that if you can hold on to your dream and stay optimistic and cheerful， you are sure to accomplish something great and have a nice life.
Finally， what I want to tell you is that it’s your shining smile that impresses me most.