新闻的描写

• 作 者: 陆拂为
• 机 构: 新华社国内部,
• 出 处: 新闻记者
• 发表日期: 1985年04期
• 关键词: 细节描写 吴吉昌 干净利索 所持 人物通讯 心理描写 采访对象 告诉我 现场气氛 节日活动

在编辑部里,常会碰到这样的事情:送来的一篇报道,编辑拿起笔来,把稿中的描写部分抹了。记者看到自认为最精彩的段落给砍去,埋怨说:“羽毛全给拔光了,大伤元气。”编辑回答说:“水份给挤掉了,干净利索。”双方还常为此进行争论。我刚当记者时,常和编辑争论;后来自己当编辑,又和记者争论。现在冷静地进行回忆、思索,具体分析一些报道的细节何以被删除,发觉原因很不相同:有时,它取决于编辑的主观认识——对细节描写所持

In the editorial department, often encounter such a thing: send a story, the editor picked up the pen, the draft part of the draft wipe. The reporter saw that he thought the most wonderful paragraph to cut off, complaining: “The plumage all to pull the light, and hurt.” The editor replied: “The water is squeezed out, cleanly.” Both often do this Argue. When I was a reporter, I often debated with the editor; later I was an editor and argued with reporters. Now calmly recall, think, analyze the details of some of the coverage of how to be deleted, for a very different reason: Sometimes, it depends on the editor’s subjective understanding of the details of the description held