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贵刊96年第8期发表谢公望先生的文章,他对《古榕》提出修改意见,我认为值得作者考虑。90年至今,我三次读到《古榕》作品。认为这株古榕根美,作品的主题是不是想反映一个古字,我们暂不发表意见,只想通过讨论修改方案,达到互相学习。我赞同谢先生的建议。我的看法是: 右第一侧枝作为第一托,定位太低,使作品有一股压抑感,右侧
Your article No. 8, 1996 issue of Mr. Xie Gongwang article, he proposed amendments to the “Gurong”, I think it is worth considering. For 90 years till now, I have read “Gurong” works three times. If we think that the theme of this plant is beauty, what is the theme of the work? Do we want to reflect on an ancient word? We will not express our views for the time being. We just want to discuss and revise the plan to achieve mutual learning. I agree with Mr. Tse’s suggestion. My opinion is: the right side of the first branch as the first care, positioning is too low, so that work has a sense of depression, the right side