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Our school holds an English Week on the second week of September every year. During the week， all the teachers and students from every grade will come to the playground and join in the rich and colorful activities. We can enjoy watching English play. We can also go to the English Book Fair or join an English Treasure Hunt. The most exciting part in the week is the English speaking competition. Students should speak on a topic in English for three minutes.
In my opinion， English Week is a big chance to improve our English. We can learn new words， and have a good time at the same time. I’m looking forward to the next English Week.
傅紅老师点评：本文开门见山，直入主题。整篇文章结构清晰、要点齐全、表达流利、过渡自然。一些亮点词句的使用，如：The most exciting part in the week is...，in my opinion， at the same time，look forward to等，提升了文章的语言档次。
“英语周”活动既是校园文化一角，更是孩子们学习英语、实践英语、展示英语的多彩平台。本篇作文的作文试题是要求根据表格内容提示介绍英语周的一些情况，考生应重点关注三点：一是要点全，二是时态准，三是连接词的恰当使用。
佳句欣赏：
1. The most exciting part in the week is the English speaking competition.
2. Students should speak on a topic in English for three minutes.
3. We can learn new words， and have a good time at the same time.
4. I’m looking forward to the next English Week.
范文：
There is an English Week in our school every year. It is the second week of September. The English Week lasts five days. All the students and teachers can take part in it on the playground. There are many activities during English Week. Some students can take part in the English speech competition. And we can also put on English plays. Of course， some students can buy their favorite books in the English Book Fair. Our teachers often sing their favorite English songs. English Week is very interesting， and it can make us more interested in English.
In my opinion， English Week is a big chance to improve our English. We can learn new words， and have a good time at the same time. I’m looking forward to the next English Week.
傅紅老师点评：本文开门见山，直入主题。整篇文章结构清晰、要点齐全、表达流利、过渡自然。一些亮点词句的使用，如：The most exciting part in the week is...，in my opinion， at the same time，look forward to等，提升了文章的语言档次。
“英语周”活动既是校园文化一角，更是孩子们学习英语、实践英语、展示英语的多彩平台。本篇作文的作文试题是要求根据表格内容提示介绍英语周的一些情况，考生应重点关注三点：一是要点全，二是时态准，三是连接词的恰当使用。
佳句欣赏：
1. The most exciting part in the week is the English speaking competition.
2. Students should speak on a topic in English for three minutes.
3. We can learn new words， and have a good time at the same time.
4. I’m looking forward to the next English Week.
范文：
There is an English Week in our school every year. It is the second week of September. The English Week lasts five days. All the students and teachers can take part in it on the playground. There are many activities during English Week. Some students can take part in the English speech competition. And we can also put on English plays. Of course， some students can buy their favorite books in the English Book Fair. Our teachers often sing their favorite English songs. English Week is very interesting， and it can make us more interested in English.