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失误原因:偏离主题题目:那一次,我____颜思远爸爸是公交车司机,最近几年都是早起晚归,每当晚上回来,他也只是打一声招呼,就看电视、吃饭、睡觉。这更是加深了我们父子之间的隔阂。暑假,为了探究老爸的工作到底是怎样的,凭什么不留一点父子之间娱乐的时间,我特意用一个下午的时间去“探班”。我和他坐着公交车来到总站,他换上了工作服,上车。我也坐了上去,拿出书来看,
Reason for the error: Deviation from the subject topic: that time, my ____ Yan Siyuan father is a bus driver, early in the last few years are back from the evening, every night back, he just say hello, watch TV, eat, sleep. This further deepens the gap between our father and son. Summer vacation, in order to explore the father’s work in the end is what, why not leave a bit of time between the entertainment of father and son, I deliberately use an afternoon time “exploration class ”. I took him to the terminal by bus, he put on the overalls, the car. I sat up, took a book to see,