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During this summer vacation， my family and I went to Beijing. Beijing is so beautiful. We visited a lot of interesting places in it.
First， we came to the Palace Museum by subway. It was really crowded there. The guide told us that the Palace Mu？鄄seum had a long history. It s really very big and beautiful. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum， you can go to Beijing to have a look.
Then we went to the Great Wall. It s one of the greatest eight wonders in the world. It s the pride of Chinese. It was built in the Ming Dynasty. One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. If you have the chance， you can come to the Great Wall.
Finally， we went to visit the Bird s Nest， the Water Cube （水立方） and Temple of Heaven. I was really happy that day.
Five days later， we returned to our city. I decide to go to Beijing University in the future because it s my dream. So I must study hard from now on！
【教師点评】
本文是一篇刚刚进入九年级的学生写的作文。
小作者按时间顺序写出了自己在北京期间参观的名胜，也写出了自己的观后感。全文主题突出、层次清晰、行文流畅。文章结尾也表达了作者的美好愿望！
（指导教师：于长英）
First， we came to the Palace Museum by subway. It was really crowded there. The guide told us that the Palace Mu？鄄seum had a long history. It s really very big and beautiful. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum， you can go to Beijing to have a look.
Then we went to the Great Wall. It s one of the greatest eight wonders in the world. It s the pride of Chinese. It was built in the Ming Dynasty. One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. If you have the chance， you can come to the Great Wall.
Finally， we went to visit the Bird s Nest， the Water Cube （水立方） and Temple of Heaven. I was really happy that day.
Five days later， we returned to our city. I decide to go to Beijing University in the future because it s my dream. So I must study hard from now on！
【教師点评】
本文是一篇刚刚进入九年级的学生写的作文。
小作者按时间顺序写出了自己在北京期间参观的名胜，也写出了自己的观后感。全文主题突出、层次清晰、行文流畅。文章结尾也表达了作者的美好愿望！
（指导教师：于长英）