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我的学生写了篇作文,题目叫《饺子最难吃》,写得很好。特别是写煮饺子时,她写道:开始下锅了,饺子像不会游泳的孩子一样沉到了水底。——蒋玲《饺子最难吃》在我看来,一个学生能写出“饺子像不会游泳的孩子一样沉到了水底”这样的句子,比起村上春树写的“他一直用手指摆弄着耳轮,俨然清点一捆崭新的钞票”(《舞》),塞林格写的“天冷得像巫婆的奶头”(《麦田里的守望者》),是一点都不逊色的。于是我就想,
My student wrote an essay entitled “Most Unpalatable Dumplings,” written very well. When writing boiled dumplings in particular, she wrote: When the pot was started, the dumplings sank as underwater as children who could not swim. - Jiang Ling “The most unhealthy dumpling” In my opinion, a student can write “Dumplings like a swimmer can not sink to the bottom of the water,” such a sentence, compared to Murakami wrote “he has been With your fingers on the earbuds, as if counting a bunch of new banknotes ”(“ Dance ”), Salinger wrote“ The weather is like a witch’s teat ”(“ Catcher in the Rye ”), Not inferior. So I thought