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亲情是家庭生活类作文中一个永恒不变的主题,其相关素材也是我们备战中考作文时需要积累的一个重要方面。但不可否认的是,通过三年的初中学习,真正能写好亲情类文章的学生却不多,那么,我们如何才能写好亲情类文章呢?笔者认为,一篇好的亲情文章一定要能打动人心。写作时要注意做到以下两点:一是要善于捕捉生活中感人的素材,二是要细致入微地打造亲情素材。一、善于捕捉生活中感人的素材1.凝视生活。在平时的教学过程中,我总是能听到学生抱怨亲情主题没有什么素材可写,没有什么话可说。究其原因,是我们没有慢下脚步凝视生活。正如著名儿童文学作家、北大教授曹文轩所说的:“未经凝视的世
Family affection is an eternal theme in the composition of family life, and its related material is also an important aspect that we need to accumulate when preparing for a test essay. However, it is undeniable that, after three years of junior high school, there are not many students who really can write good affection articles. So how can we write a series of affection articles? In my opinion, a good affection article must be able to heartstrings. Writing should pay attention to the following two points: First, we must be good at capturing the moving life of the material, the second is to nuanced to create family material. First, good at capturing the moving material 1. Staring life. In the usual teaching process, I can always hear the students complain about the theme of affection no material can be written, there is nothing to be said. The reason is that we did not slow down to gaze life. As the famous writer of children’s literature, Peking University professor Cao Wenxuan said: ”Unregulated