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行书杜牧诗三首中堂刘忠明(内蒙古):这幅行书四屏杜牧诗,空间开张,结体松动,整体篇章把握得不错,说明作者有较好的宋人黄山谷大字行书的研习,但细节不够,实在用笔,如横折处,动作简单直过,而且断笔较多,造成短笔交集,略显零碎,此外,开篇“烟笼”两字相连是否得当,“未”字两横的长短,落款名字与正文风格的统一,也值得推敲,建议多从黄山谷楷书入手,横观宋人风貌为参顾,以动作充实线质,以静促动,以实化虚,踏实进程,必有所得。
Liu Duoming (Inner Mongolia): This four-screen Du Mu poetry of the travel book, opened in space, loose knot, the overall chapter grasp well, indicating that the author has a better song of Huangshan Valley, the author of the book to study, but the details Not enough, really use the pen, such as the cross-fold, simple action straight, but also broken pen more, resulting in a short pen intersection, slightly fragmented, in addition, the opening “Cigarette ” connected properly, “ ”The length of the word two horizontal, inscribed name and the style of the unity of the body, but also worth considering, it is recommended to start from the regular script Huangshan Valley, Hengshan style cross-reference, to enrich the line of action, to promote static action to actualize Virtual, practical progress, must have income.