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下面是一则调侃作文空洞无物的故事:老师跟同学们玩游戏——你猜他(她)是谁?老师说:“他长着一个脑袋,两只眼睛,一个鼻子,一个嘴巴,两只耳朵。你猜他是谁?”学生站起来说:“猪!”老师说:“我要你猜的是人,怎么会是猪呢?”学生理直气壮地说:“猪不是有一个脑袋,两只眼睛吗?猪不是有一个鼻子、一个嘴巴吗?猪也有两只耳朵呀。怎么猜错了?”很多老师把作文空洞的原因归结为同学们“缺乏生活体验”和“不善于观察”。这的确是导致作文空洞
Here's a story of a joke about writing's empty stuff: teachers play games with classmates - guess what he or she is? The teacher says: “He has a head, two eyes, a nose, a mouth, two Only ears.You guess who he is? ”“ The student stood up and said: ”Pig!“ The teacher said: ”I want you to guess the person is, how is it a pig?“ ”Students confidently say: Pig is not a head, two eyes? Pig is not a nose, a mouth? Pig also has two ears Yeah. How guessed? “Many teachers attributed the cause of the writing is empty because of the students ” Lack of life Experience “and ” not good at observing ". This really does lead to writing is empty