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Last weekend we decided to spend a day in the country. The only trouble is
was
that other people had exactly a same idea. We moved out of the city slowly behind
the
a long line of cars， and∧last we came to a quiet country road and， after some time，
at
stopped in a lonely farm. We got our food out from the car and sat down near a
on of
path at the foot of a hill. It was very peace in the cool grass—until we heard of
peaceful
bells ringing at the top of the hill. That we saw made us pick up our things and
What
ran back to the car. Hundreds of sheep was coming toward us down the path！
run were
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Dear Bill，
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu in May. You’ve made a wise choice to travel here. Chengdu， the capital city of Sichuan Province， is located in central Sichuan and has a population of over 12 million. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many famous places of historic interest， such as the Jinsha Ruin Site and the Wuhou Temple.
As for the weather here， it is pleasant， neither too hot nor too cold. The transportation is convenient. You can travel to many places by bus， by train， by subway and so on. If the trip is short， you can also ride a bicycle or even on foot. Anyhow， I’m sure you’ll have a good time here.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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Wei Hua is very good at her lessons at school. He like watching TV after he
his likes
finishes his homework. His father does not allow him∧watch TV， because he is
to
afraid of that it will be bad for his studies. But Wei Hua doesn’t think so. He thinks
there is a lot of good TV programs. He can learn a lot from TV. For an example， he
are
can learn English through the English programs broadcasting on TV. He can also
broadcast/ broadcasted
learns Chinese， maths， physics， chemistry and many other subjects. Because he learn So
thinks it’s good to a student to watch TV after he finishes his homework.
for
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Dear Bill，
I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to work in China. I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Deyang and Chengdu.
Both of the cities are very attractive and popular. Chengdu， the capital city of Sichuan Province， is situated in central Sichuan while Deyang is a medium-sized city， which is not far from Chengdu. The living conditions in both cities are excellent and the transportation there is very convenient， but Deyang is less crowded than Chengdu. Chengdu is a modern and business city with a larger population； similarly， Deyang is developing very fast， but people there live a peaceful life. Both cities have many job opportunities.
So， it’s up to you to decide where you are going to work in the future. For more information， please let me know.
Best regards.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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A terrible storm took place in a summer night. The wind was so strong that
on
many trees∧brought down. It was already eleven o’clock. Li Ming， who had been
were gone
to night school， was still not back and his parents were very anxiously. Half an hour
anxious
late the wind stopped， and it was still raining. Li Ming’s parents were about to
later but
looking for him when he returned. Li Ming explained the storm has pushed over
look had
many big trees as well as telephone line， blocking the roads. And the bridge had
lines
been washed away by the floods. So he had to find the another way back.
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Sandstorms are getting more and more serious in some regions in China， which attracted people’s attention.
But what are the causes of the storms？ To begin with， the desert in Mongolia forms the major source of the sandstorms. Besides， the continuous high temperature and little rain are also responsible for the storms. Furthermore， the destruction of forest and population growth also play an important role in the formation of serious sandstorms.
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Ever since the beginning of history， people∧dreamed of traveling to other
have
planets. For century， these wonderful dreams have remained dreams. But our
centuries
dreams would come truely in the future. The first people from the Earth will land on
will true
Mars. But by the year 2170， people will have been set up cities and industries on
And
Mars. Scientists are now making plans to travel among the Earth and Mars， so that
between
they will become possible for human beings to live and work on there. So in order
it
to realizing the dream， we must try to develop our space technology as quickly as
realize
we can.
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Dear Mike，
I’m glad that you’ll come to our school to study Chinese.
During the three months， from Monday to Friday， you’ll have 4 Chinese classes in the morning，and in the afternoon， you’re supposed to give us two English classes. If you don’t mind， you can live in my home. In this way， we can learn from each other in language study. At the weekends， you’re free， and I will act as your guide to show you around our city.As you know， there are lots of places of interest here. Besides， you don’t need to worry about the traffic. It’s convenient. You can go almost everywhere by bus， by train and by bike. It won’t cost you much.
Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
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Once there was∧famous scientist. He thought not only about his work. One
a
afternoon he felt hunger. He went into the kitchen， boiling some water， and took an
hungry boiled
egg from the cupboard. He wants to boil the egg for three minute. He was thinking
wanted minutes
about his work， so he put his watch into the boiling water. He stood with the egg in his hand， looked for it. Then the servant came into the kitchen. The scientist was
looking
very surprising when she told him that what he was doing. How a lovely scientist！ surprised What
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Dear Tom，
I’m so glad to receive your letter.
Like most of the people in the world， we have realized the importance of the environmental protection. In our city， everyone is called on to pay attention to it. You can see ads on TV， magazines or at bus stations. As a result， there have been some changes in our daily life. For example， when people need to go out， they choose to ride a bicycle， take a bus or even walk instead of driving their own cars. When they go shopping， they prefer to carry shopping bags instead of using plastic bags to carry things.
We are happy to see the changes taking place in our city and we are sure our city will become more beautiful.
Best wishes！
Yours
Li Hua
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The temple stands near this city. It dated from 1961 and is 50 meters high.
dates
It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 50，000 tourists come
temples
to visit∧every year. Five years before， it was decided to repair the temple， but the
it ago and
work was completed last year. The ground floor has been complete painted， and
completely
also the roof， too. All the rooms have been protected from birds by fix wires across the
fixing
windows. Trees and flowers has been planted around the temple. We believe， in a
have
few years， the temple will take on∧new look.
a
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Dear Tom，
I am really very sorry that I can’t go to Chengdu with you next weekend， which I have promised. I feel it a pity and want you to know what happened.
My best friend， Li Qiong， who went to Australia for his further study last year， told me that he would return this Saturday morning， and he asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know， we haven’t seen each other for a year.
I sincerely hope you will accept my apology and understand my situation. I would appreciate it if you allow me to make another date to show you around Chengdu. I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
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66. absolutely 67. enormous 68. process 69. argument 70. concerned 71. polluted 72. warning 73. conditions 74. unluckily或unfortunately 75. equal
76. You are who your friends are.
77. They’ll influence you.
78. People have different attitudes towards the same thing.
79. Because the writer believes that by taking writer’s “easy exercise” people can come to the right way of making friends.
80. This passage is mainly written for some people who want to succeed.
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In the morning of April 29， 2013， hundreds of millions of middle schools and
On
universities all over the China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven
thousands and I in our city took an active part in this program. The program was
thousand
holding to call on students to have daily exercise in the hope∧we will be healthy
held that
enough to study and enjoy themselves. I think it’s a good idea for us students to
ourselves
have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise， it is worth do it.
doing
Taking exercise every day help us build our bodies and keep a clear mind. By this
helps In
way we can feel energetic and study more efficient.
efficiently
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Dear Sir，
I’m writing to tell you something about the heavy traffic in our city.
More people have their own cars. On one hand，it means that people begin to live a better life. It is convenient for them to travel around. On the other hand， it does harm to us. The traffic in our city is becoming much more crowded. What’s worse， the air becomes dirtier.
In my opinion， our government should do something to change this condition. For example， we can limit the number of private cars. But the most important thing is to learn to be friendly to environment. If the trip is not long， we can go out by bus， by bike or even on foot instead of driving our own cars. In this way， we can keep our environment clean and make our lifestyle better.
Do you agree with me？ I am expecting your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
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As the world enters∧21st century， the development in science and
the
technology will bring us many more hopes and chances we’ve never imagined
ago. People are hoped to have a peacefully and highly developed world. To catch
before hoping peaceful
up with the new development but to be successful in the new century the young
and
generation is required to have different kind of skills and abilities， such as
kinds
computer science and English. Otherwise one will not be left behind. Young people
will study even hard at school. And they will prepare them mentally and physically
harder themselves
∧meet the challenge of the new century.
to
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In the future， man’s life will be very different from that of today. First， with the development of medicine， people will live longer and healthier. Second， because of the discovery of new energy， the environmental pollution will be under control. Third， people’s daily life will change greatly， too. For example， robots will do most of your housework for you； you can take your video mobile phone with you and see the caller while speaking. The most exciting thing is that man will have more free time and each city will have its own spaceport， so you can even go into space for your holidays！
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Last Sunday after a breakfast I decided to see a film. The cinema was a bit
far away，∧I had to take a bus there. When I was sitting on the bus， an old woman
so
got off. There were no seats free， for I stood up at once and said to me， “Come
on so her
here and take my seat， please.” The old women walked over and sat down. She
woman
was exciting， saying “Thank you very much， dear little girl.” Soon the bus stopped
excited
in the front of the cinema. I got off and waved goodbye for the old woman. I felt
to
very happily for doing a good deed.
happy
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Dear Tom，
Now let me answer the questions you raised in your e-mail.
In the past few years， the number of family cars in my country has increased， so has the number of traffic accidents. As a result， cars have been damaged and the unfortunate people have got injured or even killed. The causes of traffic accidents lie in the following facts. First， some drivers don’t obey traffic rules. They drive too fast or drive after drinking. Second， some cyclists ride their bikes too close to vehicles， what’s worse， some pedestrians cross the street against the red light.
In my opinion， everyone should increase their awareness of safety. Traffic rules must be obeyed strictly. In addition， our government should develop the public transport system and limit the number of family cars.
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua
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What a long winter vacation！ I stay at home doing nothing except homework
stayed
every day as a robot. One day， an idea occurred to me： “Why not to find a part-
like
time job to learn something newly？” The next morning， before visiting many shops，
new after
I was lucky enough to find it in a small but pretty cake shop. When a tired-looking
one
old man came in to buy some cake， I immediately helped him sit down in the chair
a
and brought him the cakes. After he paid∧them， I said thanks to him. He looked
for
very happy but praised me with a satisfying smile.
and satisfied
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Dear Peter，
I’m very glad to learn that you want to be an international volunteer. In order to be a good volunteer， we should study a foreign language as well as body language.
Body language varies from culture to culture. Take greetings for example. Traditionally， French are open-minded. They shake hands and kiss each other on both cheeks when they meet people they know. Men from Middle East and other Muslin countries often stand close to other men when talking， but they will never touch women. They just nod at women. Now people all over the world greet each other by shaking hands， but Japanese prefer to bow.
Studying body language will help reduce misunderstanding and avoid the difficulties in communication.
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua
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Lin Qiaozhi， the specialist in men’s diseases， lived from1901 to 1983. She a women
devoted her whole life to help women of China， especially those in∧countryside.
helping the
To cut the death rate of having and caring for baby in the country， she gave some
babies
simple rules in her book for women to follow for keeping their babies clean，
healthy but free from sickness. She was so busy in her career that about 50，000
and
babies are safely delivered by her own. Devoted to her patients， she chose not to
were
have a family of her own and often worked lately at night to deliver a baby for a
late
poor family after a day’s tired work.
tiring
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How I Overcame Difficulties in Learning English
Many students have some difficulty in learning English.
Like any other English learners， I met a lot of difficulties in learning English.
First， I found it difficult to understand what I read because most English words have more than one meaning. Besides， I found it difficult to write in idiomatic English. Finally， I couldn’t express myself in English orally.
But I didn’t lose heart in overcoming the difficulties. First， I tried to understand and memorize words from the context. Second， I improved spoken English by listening to the English broadcast and keeping English diaries every day. Now I can express myself in English quite freely and correctly.
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During my stay in the Britain， I went to some pubs with my friends to listen
to music or watch football match. On this way， I experienced part of the British
matches In
culture. Besides， I visited many libraries and museums but also I traveled to
and
several British cities. This is really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience， which helped me in many ways. First， I learn to be independent and make some
learned
decisions by me. Second， I got to know more about∧differences from Britain
myself the between
and China. I also made a lot of friends there and had my English improving， which
improved
has great enriched my life.
greatly
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A Trip to Beijing
During the long National Day holidays my family and I took a trip to Beijing. On October 1st， we took the 8：00 flight to Beijing and visited the Tiananmen Square in the afternoon. Next day， we visited the Great Wall， the longest wall in the world. For the next two days， we visited the Summer Palace， walked around and did some shopping. On October 5th， we took a bus to Tai’an City to climb Mount Tai， on the top of which we were lucky enough to see the sunrise early the next morning. In the afternoon， we returned to Beijing and then came home by plane. We enjoyed our travel very much.
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Life on land probably began about 430 million years before. It is thought that
ago
life has existed in the water for perhaps as far as 3，000 million years. When we
long
think of the first life on land， we probably think of strange animal coming out in
animals of
the ocean. But， in fact， no animals could have been living if plants have not been on
had
land first. Plants had to be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the first
before
land animals∧food necessary to live. Since it—the plants are the only form of life
with they
that is able to get but store energy. Plants are so important！
and
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A Monster in a Lake
Last Sunday my classmates and I took a trip to a lake. We were walking around the lake when we saw a monster swimming in the middle of the lake. It was nearly 500 meters long， so we were able to see it clearly. It was brown and had a long neck and a small head. It appeared huge and made a lot of waves while swimming. We watched it moving through the water for about five minutes. Then it dived in the water and disappeared. We stayed by the lake for another hour but it never appeared again. It was such an exciting and unbelievable experience that nobody believe us.
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66. species 67. varies 68. supported 69. breakthrough 70. Traditionally 71. solution 72. resources 73. construction 74. provided 75. communicate
76. They received a special award.
77. No， they weren’t. Because three students lost their lives when they tried to save the students. 78. It tells how the students saved the two boys.
79. Because the human wall broke down.
80. We should learn from these students. They were all heroes.
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Today our class organized a activity to climb Mount Qingcheng. We set off
an
by bus at 8 a.m. Half an hour late we arrived∧the foot of the mountain. In order
later at
to get some exercises and enjoy the scenery more fully， we walk up instead of
exercise walked
taking the bus. The higher we climbed， the more tired we felt， and no one gave up.
but
At last we all reached on the top， where we enjoyed our lunch and took many
photos. At 4 p.m.， they returned home. Though I am still tired， I feel happily.
we happy
Above all， I have realized that we can succeed as well as we keep on.
long
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Dear Student Union，
I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and I took great interest in becoming one of them. Now I’m writing to apply for this opportunity.
I am Li Hua， a boy of 18， and my English is excellent. Now I’m a member of Loving Heart Club in our school. Voluntary work has helped me get good communication skills.
Love makes the world go around. In my opinion， being a volunteer teacher at the S.O.S. Village is more than just teaching； it is helpful to improve our understanding of the world. By helping those kids， we can make a difference to their future and make a contribution to society. I will do my best if I could be accepted.
I’m looking forward to your reply and please email me at lihua @ 163.com.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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66. landmarks 67. progress 68. Luckily / Fortunately 69. forecast（ed） 70. equal 71. alternative 72. developed 73. supporting 74. exploit 75. indicated
76. We can see a lot of buses， cars and bikes on the road.
77. He went to work by bus.
78. It took the writer half an hour to go to work by bike.
79. He hoped people would have roads for bicycles only.
80. Because traveling by bike is not only quick and cheap but also good for health.
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Mark Twain liked playing jokes about his friends. One day， one of his friends
on lost their wallet and asked him to buy the train ticket for him. “And I don’t have
his a But
enough money to pay∧both your ticket and mine，” Mark Twain said. The friend
for
didn’t know what to do it. “Let’s do this，” Mark Twain says， “You can get on the
said
train and when the conductor come to check the ticket you can hide under my
comes
seat.” Lately， however， when the conductor came to check the ticket， Mark Twain
Later
gave him two tickets—one for himself and∧other for his friend.
the
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Good morning， everyone！
We’ve been learning English for a year since we entered senior high school. I’d like to share with you my experience in English learning.
First， I think it useful to remember as many English words as possible and master some basic grammar. And then， we should spend time reading English magazines and newspapers. Besides， keeping diaries in English is also an effective way to improve our English.
In my opinion， Learning English not only increases my knowledge of foreign cultures but also helps me communicate with foreigners.
However， sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have learned. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to learn English better.
Thank you for listening.
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Last weekend we decided to spend a day in the country. The only trouble is
was
that other people had exactly a same idea. We moved out of the city slowly behind
the
a long line of cars， and∧last we came to a quiet country road and， after some time，
at
stopped in a lonely farm. We got our food out from the car and sat down near a
on of
path at the foot of a hill. It was very peace in the cool grass—until we heard of
peaceful
bells ringing at the top of the hill. That we saw made us pick up our things and
What
ran back to the car. Hundreds of sheep was coming toward us down the path！
run were
One possible version：
Dear Bill，
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu in May. You’ve made a wise choice to travel here. Chengdu， the capital city of Sichuan Province， is located in central Sichuan and has a population of over 12 million. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many famous places of historic interest， such as the Jinsha Ruin Site and the Wuhou Temple.
As for the weather here， it is pleasant， neither too hot nor too cold. The transportation is convenient. You can travel to many places by bus， by train， by subway and so on. If the trip is short， you can also ride a bicycle or even on foot. Anyhow， I’m sure you’ll have a good time here.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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Wei Hua is very good at her lessons at school. He like watching TV after he
his likes
finishes his homework. His father does not allow him∧watch TV， because he is
to
afraid of that it will be bad for his studies. But Wei Hua doesn’t think so. He thinks
there is a lot of good TV programs. He can learn a lot from TV. For an example， he
are
can learn English through the English programs broadcasting on TV. He can also
broadcast/ broadcasted
learns Chinese， maths， physics， chemistry and many other subjects. Because he learn So
thinks it’s good to a student to watch TV after he finishes his homework.
for
One possible version：
Dear Bill，
I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to work in China. I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Deyang and Chengdu.
Both of the cities are very attractive and popular. Chengdu， the capital city of Sichuan Province， is situated in central Sichuan while Deyang is a medium-sized city， which is not far from Chengdu. The living conditions in both cities are excellent and the transportation there is very convenient， but Deyang is less crowded than Chengdu. Chengdu is a modern and business city with a larger population； similarly， Deyang is developing very fast， but people there live a peaceful life. Both cities have many job opportunities.
So， it’s up to you to decide where you are going to work in the future. For more information， please let me know.
Best regards.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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A terrible storm took place in a summer night. The wind was so strong that
on
many trees∧brought down. It was already eleven o’clock. Li Ming， who had been
were gone
to night school， was still not back and his parents were very anxiously. Half an hour
anxious
late the wind stopped， and it was still raining. Li Ming’s parents were about to
later but
looking for him when he returned. Li Ming explained the storm has pushed over
look had
many big trees as well as telephone line， blocking the roads. And the bridge had
lines
been washed away by the floods. So he had to find the another way back.
One possible version：
Sandstorms are getting more and more serious in some regions in China， which attracted people’s attention.
But what are the causes of the storms？ To begin with， the desert in Mongolia forms the major source of the sandstorms. Besides， the continuous high temperature and little rain are also responsible for the storms. Furthermore， the destruction of forest and population growth also play an important role in the formation of serious sandstorms.
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Ever since the beginning of history， people∧dreamed of traveling to other
have
planets. For century， these wonderful dreams have remained dreams. But our
centuries
dreams would come truely in the future. The first people from the Earth will land on
will true
Mars. But by the year 2170， people will have been set up cities and industries on
And
Mars. Scientists are now making plans to travel among the Earth and Mars， so that
between
they will become possible for human beings to live and work on there. So in order
it
to realizing the dream， we must try to develop our space technology as quickly as
realize
we can.
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Dear Mike，
I’m glad that you’ll come to our school to study Chinese.
During the three months， from Monday to Friday， you’ll have 4 Chinese classes in the morning，and in the afternoon， you’re supposed to give us two English classes. If you don’t mind， you can live in my home. In this way， we can learn from each other in language study. At the weekends， you’re free， and I will act as your guide to show you around our city.As you know， there are lots of places of interest here. Besides， you don’t need to worry about the traffic. It’s convenient. You can go almost everywhere by bus， by train and by bike. It won’t cost you much.
Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
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Once there was∧famous scientist. He thought not only about his work. One
a
afternoon he felt hunger. He went into the kitchen， boiling some water， and took an
hungry boiled
egg from the cupboard. He wants to boil the egg for three minute. He was thinking
wanted minutes
about his work， so he put his watch into the boiling water. He stood with the egg in his hand， looked for it. Then the servant came into the kitchen. The scientist was
looking
very surprising when she told him that what he was doing. How a lovely scientist！ surprised What
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Dear Tom，
I’m so glad to receive your letter.
Like most of the people in the world， we have realized the importance of the environmental protection. In our city， everyone is called on to pay attention to it. You can see ads on TV， magazines or at bus stations. As a result， there have been some changes in our daily life. For example， when people need to go out， they choose to ride a bicycle， take a bus or even walk instead of driving their own cars. When they go shopping， they prefer to carry shopping bags instead of using plastic bags to carry things.
We are happy to see the changes taking place in our city and we are sure our city will become more beautiful.
Best wishes！
Yours
Li Hua
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The temple stands near this city. It dated from 1961 and is 50 meters high.
dates
It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 50，000 tourists come
temples
to visit∧every year. Five years before， it was decided to repair the temple， but the
it ago and
work was completed last year. The ground floor has been complete painted， and
completely
also the roof， too. All the rooms have been protected from birds by fix wires across the
fixing
windows. Trees and flowers has been planted around the temple. We believe， in a
have
few years， the temple will take on∧new look.
a
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Dear Tom，
I am really very sorry that I can’t go to Chengdu with you next weekend， which I have promised. I feel it a pity and want you to know what happened.
My best friend， Li Qiong， who went to Australia for his further study last year， told me that he would return this Saturday morning， and he asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know， we haven’t seen each other for a year.
I sincerely hope you will accept my apology and understand my situation. I would appreciate it if you allow me to make another date to show you around Chengdu. I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
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66. absolutely 67. enormous 68. process 69. argument 70. concerned 71. polluted 72. warning 73. conditions 74. unluckily或unfortunately 75. equal
76. You are who your friends are.
77. They’ll influence you.
78. People have different attitudes towards the same thing.
79. Because the writer believes that by taking writer’s “easy exercise” people can come to the right way of making friends.
80. This passage is mainly written for some people who want to succeed.
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In the morning of April 29， 2013， hundreds of millions of middle schools and
On
universities all over the China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven
thousands and I in our city took an active part in this program. The program was
thousand
holding to call on students to have daily exercise in the hope∧we will be healthy
held that
enough to study and enjoy themselves. I think it’s a good idea for us students to
ourselves
have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise， it is worth do it.
doing
Taking exercise every day help us build our bodies and keep a clear mind. By this
helps In
way we can feel energetic and study more efficient.
efficiently
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Dear Sir，
I’m writing to tell you something about the heavy traffic in our city.
More people have their own cars. On one hand，it means that people begin to live a better life. It is convenient for them to travel around. On the other hand， it does harm to us. The traffic in our city is becoming much more crowded. What’s worse， the air becomes dirtier.
In my opinion， our government should do something to change this condition. For example， we can limit the number of private cars. But the most important thing is to learn to be friendly to environment. If the trip is not long， we can go out by bus， by bike or even on foot instead of driving our own cars. In this way， we can keep our environment clean and make our lifestyle better.
Do you agree with me？ I am expecting your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
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As the world enters∧21st century， the development in science and
the
technology will bring us many more hopes and chances we’ve never imagined
ago. People are hoped to have a peacefully and highly developed world. To catch
before hoping peaceful
up with the new development but to be successful in the new century the young
and
generation is required to have different kind of skills and abilities， such as
kinds
computer science and English. Otherwise one will not be left behind. Young people
will study even hard at school. And they will prepare them mentally and physically
harder themselves
∧meet the challenge of the new century.
to
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In the future， man’s life will be very different from that of today. First， with the development of medicine， people will live longer and healthier. Second， because of the discovery of new energy， the environmental pollution will be under control. Third， people’s daily life will change greatly， too. For example， robots will do most of your housework for you； you can take your video mobile phone with you and see the caller while speaking. The most exciting thing is that man will have more free time and each city will have its own spaceport， so you can even go into space for your holidays！
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Last Sunday after a breakfast I decided to see a film. The cinema was a bit
far away，∧I had to take a bus there. When I was sitting on the bus， an old woman
so
got off. There were no seats free， for I stood up at once and said to me， “Come
on so her
here and take my seat， please.” The old women walked over and sat down. She
woman
was exciting， saying “Thank you very much， dear little girl.” Soon the bus stopped
excited
in the front of the cinema. I got off and waved goodbye for the old woman. I felt
to
very happily for doing a good deed.
happy
One possible version：
Dear Tom，
Now let me answer the questions you raised in your e-mail.
In the past few years， the number of family cars in my country has increased， so has the number of traffic accidents. As a result， cars have been damaged and the unfortunate people have got injured or even killed. The causes of traffic accidents lie in the following facts. First， some drivers don’t obey traffic rules. They drive too fast or drive after drinking. Second， some cyclists ride their bikes too close to vehicles， what’s worse， some pedestrians cross the street against the red light.
In my opinion， everyone should increase their awareness of safety. Traffic rules must be obeyed strictly. In addition， our government should develop the public transport system and limit the number of family cars.
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua
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What a long winter vacation！ I stay at home doing nothing except homework
stayed
every day as a robot. One day， an idea occurred to me： “Why not to find a part-
like
time job to learn something newly？” The next morning， before visiting many shops，
new after
I was lucky enough to find it in a small but pretty cake shop. When a tired-looking
one
old man came in to buy some cake， I immediately helped him sit down in the chair
a
and brought him the cakes. After he paid∧them， I said thanks to him. He looked
for
very happy but praised me with a satisfying smile.
and satisfied
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Dear Peter，
I’m very glad to learn that you want to be an international volunteer. In order to be a good volunteer， we should study a foreign language as well as body language.
Body language varies from culture to culture. Take greetings for example. Traditionally， French are open-minded. They shake hands and kiss each other on both cheeks when they meet people they know. Men from Middle East and other Muslin countries often stand close to other men when talking， but they will never touch women. They just nod at women. Now people all over the world greet each other by shaking hands， but Japanese prefer to bow.
Studying body language will help reduce misunderstanding and avoid the difficulties in communication.
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua
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Lin Qiaozhi， the specialist in men’s diseases， lived from1901 to 1983. She a women
devoted her whole life to help women of China， especially those in∧countryside.
helping the
To cut the death rate of having and caring for baby in the country， she gave some
babies
simple rules in her book for women to follow for keeping their babies clean，
healthy but free from sickness. She was so busy in her career that about 50，000
and
babies are safely delivered by her own. Devoted to her patients， she chose not to
were
have a family of her own and often worked lately at night to deliver a baby for a
late
poor family after a day’s tired work.
tiring
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How I Overcame Difficulties in Learning English
Many students have some difficulty in learning English.
Like any other English learners， I met a lot of difficulties in learning English.
First， I found it difficult to understand what I read because most English words have more than one meaning. Besides， I found it difficult to write in idiomatic English. Finally， I couldn’t express myself in English orally.
But I didn’t lose heart in overcoming the difficulties. First， I tried to understand and memorize words from the context. Second， I improved spoken English by listening to the English broadcast and keeping English diaries every day. Now I can express myself in English quite freely and correctly.
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During my stay in the Britain， I went to some pubs with my friends to listen
to music or watch football match. On this way， I experienced part of the British
matches In
culture. Besides， I visited many libraries and museums but also I traveled to
and
several British cities. This is really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience， which helped me in many ways. First， I learn to be independent and make some
learned
decisions by me. Second， I got to know more about∧differences from Britain
myself the between
and China. I also made a lot of friends there and had my English improving， which
improved
has great enriched my life.
greatly
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A Trip to Beijing
During the long National Day holidays my family and I took a trip to Beijing. On October 1st， we took the 8：00 flight to Beijing and visited the Tiananmen Square in the afternoon. Next day， we visited the Great Wall， the longest wall in the world. For the next two days， we visited the Summer Palace， walked around and did some shopping. On October 5th， we took a bus to Tai’an City to climb Mount Tai， on the top of which we were lucky enough to see the sunrise early the next morning. In the afternoon， we returned to Beijing and then came home by plane. We enjoyed our travel very much.
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Life on land probably began about 430 million years before. It is thought that
ago
life has existed in the water for perhaps as far as 3，000 million years. When we
long
think of the first life on land， we probably think of strange animal coming out in
animals of
the ocean. But， in fact， no animals could have been living if plants have not been on
had
land first. Plants had to be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the first
before
land animals∧food necessary to live. Since it—the plants are the only form of life
with they
that is able to get but store energy. Plants are so important！
and
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A Monster in a Lake
Last Sunday my classmates and I took a trip to a lake. We were walking around the lake when we saw a monster swimming in the middle of the lake. It was nearly 500 meters long， so we were able to see it clearly. It was brown and had a long neck and a small head. It appeared huge and made a lot of waves while swimming. We watched it moving through the water for about five minutes. Then it dived in the water and disappeared. We stayed by the lake for another hour but it never appeared again. It was such an exciting and unbelievable experience that nobody believe us.
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66. species 67. varies 68. supported 69. breakthrough 70. Traditionally 71. solution 72. resources 73. construction 74. provided 75. communicate
76. They received a special award.
77. No， they weren’t. Because three students lost their lives when they tried to save the students. 78. It tells how the students saved the two boys.
79. Because the human wall broke down.
80. We should learn from these students. They were all heroes.
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Today our class organized a activity to climb Mount Qingcheng. We set off
an
by bus at 8 a.m. Half an hour late we arrived∧the foot of the mountain. In order
later at
to get some exercises and enjoy the scenery more fully， we walk up instead of
exercise walked
taking the bus. The higher we climbed， the more tired we felt， and no one gave up.
but
At last we all reached on the top， where we enjoyed our lunch and took many
photos. At 4 p.m.， they returned home. Though I am still tired， I feel happily.
we happy
Above all， I have realized that we can succeed as well as we keep on.
long
One possible version：
Dear Student Union，
I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and I took great interest in becoming one of them. Now I’m writing to apply for this opportunity.
I am Li Hua， a boy of 18， and my English is excellent. Now I’m a member of Loving Heart Club in our school. Voluntary work has helped me get good communication skills.
Love makes the world go around. In my opinion， being a volunteer teacher at the S.O.S. Village is more than just teaching； it is helpful to improve our understanding of the world. By helping those kids， we can make a difference to their future and make a contribution to society. I will do my best if I could be accepted.
I’m looking forward to your reply and please email me at lihua @ 163.com.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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66. landmarks 67. progress 68. Luckily / Fortunately 69. forecast（ed） 70. equal 71. alternative 72. developed 73. supporting 74. exploit 75. indicated
76. We can see a lot of buses， cars and bikes on the road.
77. He went to work by bus.
78. It took the writer half an hour to go to work by bike.
79. He hoped people would have roads for bicycles only.
80. Because traveling by bike is not only quick and cheap but also good for health.
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Mark Twain liked playing jokes about his friends. One day， one of his friends
on lost their wallet and asked him to buy the train ticket for him. “And I don’t have
his a But
enough money to pay∧both your ticket and mine，” Mark Twain said. The friend
for
didn’t know what to do it. “Let’s do this，” Mark Twain says， “You can get on the
said
train and when the conductor come to check the ticket you can hide under my
comes
seat.” Lately， however， when the conductor came to check the ticket， Mark Twain
Later
gave him two tickets—one for himself and∧other for his friend.
the
One possible version：
Good morning， everyone！
We’ve been learning English for a year since we entered senior high school. I’d like to share with you my experience in English learning.
First， I think it useful to remember as many English words as possible and master some basic grammar. And then， we should spend time reading English magazines and newspapers. Besides， keeping diaries in English is also an effective way to improve our English.
In my opinion， Learning English not only increases my knowledge of foreign cultures but also helps me communicate with foreigners.
However， sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have learned. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to learn English better.
Thank you for listening.