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之所以写作别人写烂的题材,是因为从作文实际看学生大多还没有切实掌握作文拟题的方法和技巧,而且情况还相当糟糕。本文从一次作文拟题实际出发,找出学生在作文拟题中出现的问题,并且分析产生的原因,进而引导学生正确拟题。本次作文原题呈现如下:一天上午,父亲邀我到林中漫步,我高兴地答应了。父亲在一个弯道处停了下来。在短暂的沉默之后,问我:“除了小鸟的歌唱之外,你还听到了什么声音?”我仔细地听,几秒钟之后我回答:“我听到了马车的声音。”
The reason why people write bad writing is because most students do not actually grasp the methods and techniques of writing essay questions from the actual situation of the essay, and the situation is still rather poor. Based on the actual situation of a composition thesis, this article finds the problems that the students appear in the composition problem and analyzes the causes, and then guides the students to correct the questions. The original writing of the essay is as follows: One morning, my father invited me to walk in the forest. I am glad to agree. My father stopped at a corner. After a brief silence, ask me: “What else have you heard besides the song of the bird?” I listened carefully, and after a few seconds I replied: “I heard the carriage’s voice.” "