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作文要求: 空间是物质存在的一种客观形式,由长度、高度、宽度表现出来。空间在现实生活中适用的范围较广,有相对形象的空间,如宇宙空间、生存空间、自然空间、地域空间、住房空间等:也有相对抽象的空间,如发展空间、学习空间、自由空间、思考空间、想像空间、心灵空间、感情空间等。请以“空间”为话题写一篇文章,立意自定,文体不限,题目自拟,不少于800字。学生作文原文与修改文对照(括号内为修改后内容)如下:
Composition requirements: Space is an objective form of material existence, manifested by its length, height and width. Space has a wide range of application in real life, and has relatively image space, such as space, living space, natural space, regional space, and housing space. There are also relatively abstract spaces, such as development space, learning space, and free space. Think about space, imagine space, spiritual space, emotional space, etc. Please write an article on the topic of “space”. Be prepared to make your own decisions. There should be no limitation on the style of writing. The title should be self-plotted and should not be less than 800 words. The original composition of the student’s essay is compared with the modified text (the contents in the parentheses are as follows):