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在写人记事的作品中,动作描写可以展示故事情节,表现人物形象,丰富文章内容。有的同学在写作时能够对人物进行动作描写,但就是写得太模糊,致使笔下的人物缺乏生气、灵气。让我们读一个句子:“好久没有去姑妈家了,这次刚到她家大门口,八岁的表弟就从屋里跑出来迎接我。”既然是好久没见面了,小表弟又是那么可爱,知道“我”去他很高兴,他是怎样出来迎接“我”的?仅是“出来”一词就能表达清楚这些丰富意蕴吗?那么,如何巧用动作使人物更形象呢?
In writing works of memoirs, the action description can show the story, character images, enrich the content of the article. Some students in the writing of the characters can be described, but it is written too vague, resulting in a lack of angry character, Aura. Let's read a sentence: “A long time did not go to Aunt, this time just arrived at her door, eight-year-old cousin ran out of the room to meet me.” “Since it is a long time did not meet, the little cousin Is so cute, know ”I “ to go to him very happy, how did he come out to meet ”me “ is only ”out " can express clearly these rich connotation? So, how clever Make people more action with the image?